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Oh Rainy Day

Oh rainy day, skies of gray Cold puddles on the ground I will still live through my dream With everything inside I’ve found Oh rainy day, it seems so dim But my heart can still dance So, as I wade through puddles, My dream will still enhance 10/8/19 Entry for Living the dream poetry contest. Sponsor: Line Gauthier Minimum 8 Lines Max 20 Lines

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Date: 10/9/2019 11:22:00 PM
I love rain... It's so soothing. Your poem is a great entry. Best wishes for a win. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2019 11:26:00 PM
It can be very soothing Regina. Thank you so much for your kind comment and prayers. Bless you :)
Date: 10/9/2019 9:15:00 PM
Hello Heidi … nobody appreciates rainy days like those farmers suffering through a drought. I have danced in the rain a few times. Thank you for your fine verse Heidi - Lindsay
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2019 10:45:00 PM
That's so true Lindsay. and I often think of dancing in the rain. Thank you for your comments and you are welcome :)
Date: 10/9/2019 8:34:00 AM
Beautifully done my friend. I wonderful rainy day poem. Best wishes in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Chris. I appreciate your support , always :)
Date: 10/9/2019 4:40:00 AM
Love rainy days Heidi...cute little poem my friend...a sure winner...^WW^ :o)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you so much WW :)
Date: 10/8/2019 7:38:00 PM
i like your dream, always look for the beauty in those rainy days, the gloom never lasts... wonderful poem! :) hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 10/8/2019 4:01:00 PM
Even in the rain our heart can find happiness if we contend with it.xo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2019 5:35:00 PM
Yes that is right Pixie. Thank you very much :)
Date: 10/8/2019 11:00:00 AM
Now that is a positive attitude, my friend ~ Don't let the gloom bring you down :) An uplifting piece ~ great read for this day!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you HT. It turned out to be a nice day. I hope you had a nice day too :)
Date: 10/8/2019 9:25:00 AM
Nic e l y done, great for the contest... good luck... hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2019 10:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve :)
Date: 10/8/2019 7:05:00 AM
Nice to envision blue skies on a rainy day..dream BIG my friend--enjoyed your poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Vjay! I will. Have a great day :)

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