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Oh Rain

Oh Rain! When land is dry and so is the sky, When possibility of water is only in eye; When trees turn yellow and cattle are thirsty, When dependable God behaves little nasty; When farms are burnt in the sun fire, When our kid's beds turn into pyre; When hope is lost and faith is shaken, Don't you think it's time to awaken! Oh Rain! We know our mistakes; We know what we did, Forgive us once; we'd correct our deed; Late though, we've realized your worth, Pour your love and bring back the mirth, Let heaven appear once again on earth!!

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Date: 6/14/2016 9:11:00 AM
I agree; no time better than now. We need to awaken. Love your poem!
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Pushkar Korhalkar
Date: 6/14/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Joe :-)
Date: 6/11/2016 7:31:00 PM
Pushkar,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Pushkar Korhalkar
Date: 6/14/2016 9:20:00 AM
Hi SKAT, thank you for warm welcome to poetry soup... I am still learning ABCD of poetry but your post gave me confidence that I am at right place and will learn a lot from you
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Pushkar Korhalkar
Date: 6/14/2016 9:19:00 AM
Hi SKAT, thank you for warm welcome to poetry soup... I am still learning ABCD of poetry but your post gave me confidence that I am at right place and will learn a lot from you
Date: 6/11/2016 6:23:00 AM
Pushkar, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Pushkar Korhalkar
Date: 6/14/2016 9:26:00 AM
Hi Linda, it's a pleasure to be part of poetry soup. Thank you for a kind welcome to this forum. Looking forward to learn a lot from you on poetry

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