Oh, My

Those amazing ants so-industrious scurry here and there super-conscientious Let them spot a picnic table, however They're in the food or your pants Oh, my! ~ How clever

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/2/2021 3:04:00 AM

They are so fast, and they bite! I thought that immediately when I read this one.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2021 5:31:00 PM

Ants have never bitten me.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/27/2021 10:56:00 AM

A cute write. You made me laugh. (thanks) If they are good I will feed them but stay off the picnic table. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2021 5:22:00 PM

I always tell the ants that I'll hold a special picnic just for them afterwards... ~ Just leavin' all the garbage on the table. lol. :) gw

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 5/27/2021 5:44:00 AM

They are party animals - just love to join in. Nice one Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2021 5:19:00 PM

Those ants are like my aunt. She's a 'Party Auntimal!' ~Just Cry Uncle... lol.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/26/2021 9:06:00 PM

"Oh my !" You said two of my favorite words. :) And, if I am going on a picnic, I am sure gonna pack some ant spray. Don't want any ants in my pants. (Giggle) This is so cute and creative. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2021 5:18:00 PM

Actually, sounds more like Dr. Seuss than anything else: Posthumously published - 'Ants in Pants.' lol. Thanks, Brandy. :) gw