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Oh, I wrote it for the glory

Oh, I wrote it for the glory Now I’m feeling kinda whorey For again I came up short She got half of what she sought For the pens of others reign From the Jordan to the Seine While mine at last report Just cut against the grain But I wrote it for the glory My sadly pensive story Full of lies and sweet deceit Prostrated at your feet For the rules so boldly flaunted Resound like empty houses – haunted As the scratching of my pen Makes Shakespeare spin again So, if you write just for the glory The outcome may be oh so gory If those fifteen lines of verse Went from somewhat bad – to worse

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Date: 11/23/2024 9:41:00 PM
Whoa! I read the other comments and was stunned, b/c I found this poem understatedly expressive and profoundly haunting. Oh, well; just my take, anyway. ~ gw
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Date: 11/23/2024 12:16:00 PM
Hello John, I think you captured the bittersweet struggle of writing for recognition and the weight of expectation. I liked your raw honesty and clever wordplay. I get great joy out of reading and commenting on others poems. Writing them is more cathartic. Ver relatable and thought-provoking! Autumn Nlessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/23/2024 11:28:00 AM
Ha! I enjoyed this, John! Hope you got the glory you were after…
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Date: 11/23/2024 12:50:00 AM
Who doesn't want a little glory... feeling whorey... now, that's another thing. ;) Great humour. Loved the irony
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Date: 11/22/2024 1:12:00 PM
Enjoyed the humor!
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Date: 11/22/2024 12:20:00 PM
If you are like me (which I think you are) you write because you want to and you read because you want to. In the end, it doesnt matter if people read it or not You had something to say and you said it:) Just so happens, I read it:)
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Date: 11/22/2024 12:11:00 PM
Congrats! The the rubber trophy is yours. Nice tongue in cheek humor
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