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O, I remember, as I look at our photo collection; those sweet days of our last December, from our happy smiles life looked like perfection. We hid our pain, to keep us from going totally insane; here we are smiling with our friend, see how easily we could pretend. O, I remember, going for walks hand in hand; and the beautiful leaves of September, now, at our child's grave alone I stand. As the wind blows, I lay down a perfect white baby rose; not long ago you left for your own rest, to have had you, I was blessed. O, I remember, meeting you for the first time; yes, it was on a chilly day in November, each day with you was beautiful and sublime. I have no regrets, although broken my heart never forgets; we do not get to plan the path of our life, it is carved by destiny with a knife. ______________________________ September 4, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/O, I Remember Copyright Protected, ID 18-1058-184-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Contest - Remember Sponsor - Shadow Hamilton Fifth Place

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Date: 9/9/2018 10:28:00 AM
So sadly nostalgic, but so beautifully written, and artfully presented, Constance. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/8/2018 6:37:00 PM
Lovely and heartwrenching. Beautifully penned. Congrats on your most deserving win, Dear Heart.
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Date: 9/6/2018 7:19:00 AM
sad but beautiful write here, my friend - thanks for the placement in your contest
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Date: 9/5/2018 10:35:00 AM
Fine penned piece Constance, though sad but honesty comes through showing good insight throughout. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 9/4/2018 2:49:00 PM
Hello my poetic friends, yes here we have another sad poem from my bleeding pen, do not weep for me, this is in my yesterdays but still I remember like it was today, and this is how I must write, I must write my pain ~
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