Phil Capitano Poet Sedoka

Oh How I Miss You

Oh, how I miss you
moonlight dances, so do we,
miss you though we’ve never met...
not met but in dreams,
I dream of you dreaming me
into lucid existence.


For Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer's Sedoka contest.

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Anil Deo August 8, 2018 at 5:44 PM Phil, best wishes on the BOOK - I know the Universe will reward you. Your voice is needed in these times. I pray for rxcellent sales. amen in the LORD. shalom, shalom

Anil Deo August 7, 2018 at 5:37 PM It is a Winner! Are you coming back soon, Phil? Not only a great poet and writer, we miss your encouragement. ShalomShalom Phil Capitano August 8, 2018 at 7:16 AM Thanks Anil, you are too kind. I am still here although I visit less because I am building my poet presence in other places, selling my work and working on a second book. Peace to you always.

Caren Krutsinger May 3, 2018 at 8:43 AM This is a beautiful Sedoka. I dream of you dreaming me into lucid existence. Wow! Who writes like this? You, Phil, you! Phil Capitano May 3, 2018 at 9:36 AM Thanks for the accolades Caren. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu April 16, 2018 at 2:23 PM Hello Phil, your poem is beautiful. I read your poem as a romantic poem,even though you never met. have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu April 17, 2018 at 9:04 AM You have a great day to my friend. Phil Capitano April 17, 2018 at 7:26 AM Thanks Darlene for stopping by and commenting. There is a second part to this piece that I have since added. Have a great day :)

John Hamilton September 24, 2017 at 9:38 PM I enjoy everything you write Phil, this is no exception!

Michael Bell September 3, 2017 at 2:57 PM With dreams like this, you can go places, Phil , well done Phil Capitano September 4, 2017 at 5:00 AM Thanks for visiting. Namaste.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 29, 2017 at 8:07 AM Wonderful! :) xomo!

Agnes Krampe August 25, 2017 at 5:53 PM I love the last two lines - gorgeous. Congrats on your placement, Phil. Phil Capitano August 26, 2017 at 5:14 AM Thanks Agnes, I read your winning entry ~ what a corker! Loved the 'greedy eyes' line. Ciao.

Joseph May August 24, 2017 at 5:55 PM Congrats on your win Phil

Gregory Richard Barden August 24, 2017 at 5:48 PM Very nice, Phil, love your work - congrats, my friend! :-) Phil Capitano August 25, 2017 at 6:57 AM Thanks bud. :)

Heidi Sands August 24, 2017 at 5:36 PM Congratulations Phil! :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer August 24, 2017 at 5:26 PM Nice fantasy touch Phil. Phil Capitano August 25, 2017 at 6:57 AM Thanks Cecelia, this was a first for using this form.

Winged Warrior August 22, 2017 at 10:24 AM Nice job Phil...great first attempt...best of luck...this is going to be tough to judge...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2017 at 10:31 PM This is a great entry for the contest Phil. Your last line is brilliant! : ) Phil Capitano August 21, 2017 at 7:16 AM Thanks Connie, this is my first attempt at Sedoka; fingers crossed.