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Oh, Hello September

 
I want to be lost in a sea of rainbow leaves as the drum of time rolls and September is here and Summer is a shadow on the wall of time today clouds sail across a blue azure sky though some clouds are still and powder puff beautiful but sadly my garden in the stillness is decaying and fading, fading each day with whispers of farewell for the nights are cool and crisp oh, hello September, I welcome your breezy ways and the leaves that will fall and float, spin and twirl it is time for pumpkin pies and roasted chestnuts cuddly sweaters and lighting a crackling fire and making fat apple pies like grandma used to bake and going for walks to enjoy the vibrant nature change my golden hair flowing and my cheeks blushed mauve and my lips ruby red waiting for a raindrop kiss the lovely emerald trees now vivid colors against the sky and squirrels are busy gathering and birds tweet a song as my feet crunch the leaves and the air is scented earthy oh, hello September ... ____________________ September 16, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/Oh, Hello September Copyright Protected, ID 09-1389-209-16 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Hello September sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 09/19/2021 Fourth Place

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Date: 9/20/2021 6:16:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... allowing me to enjoy September with you, since September rainy days are what we are now experiencing. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2021 7:30:00 AM
Beata, thank you for the congrats and for the comment and compliment and you are welcome on your win ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/20/2021 10:19:00 AM
This is just lovely Constance not only in its images but in the blending of the pensive undertones amid the beauty of the season. So nicely done. Congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2021 7:31:00 AM
Sam, thank you for the compliment and for the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/20/2021 8:00:00 AM
Dear Constance, congratulations on your win. I love Fall, and I love your poem describing the pretty sights, and also the sadness in our heart losing all the fun of summer. But to me, the enchanting beauty of fall leaves make up for everything we miss. To my faves. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 9/20/2021 8:11:00 AM
Mala, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment and the FAV ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/19/2021 2:21:00 PM
wonderful wonderful imagery Constance, a joy to read, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 9/20/2021 8:11:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/19/2021 1:37:00 PM
Decaying in the stillness but merely prep for a new spring. Congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/20/2021 8:12:00 AM
DM, thank you for the congrats and comment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/18/2021 1:13:00 AM
Your alphabet seems very popular Constance.Have a creative weekend
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Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2021 1:43:00 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting, yes, the alphabet contests are amazing and fill so fast, I think poets are missing your contests ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/17/2021 1:03:00 PM
Stellar penning, Constance:-) One of the best I've read for the contest and better than mine. I see this as a high placer in Mystic's contest.
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Date: 9/18/2021 1:45:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for that wonderful comment and compliment, I do hope Mystic likes my poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/17/2021 6:10:00 AM
Splendid write! September fills the air!!! Lovely! For the win!!
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Date: 9/17/2021 9:37:00 AM
JCB, thank you so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
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