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Oh Happy Day

Oh Happy Day, when you were born. For many years, my heart did mourn. Childless I lived amid the throng. Watching mothers rush children along. Alone in a restaurant, twirling the ice – Little girls with bows looking so nice Brothers and sisters laughing out loud While childless I sat amid the crowd. Primary children would sing sweet songs. Mothers would lovingly hum along. Boys on the playground would tackle their dog. I, like the old cliché, a bump on a log. Watching, with my heart breaking. Dreaming with memories aching. I lost my first child before he was born. Year after year, my mind was forlorn. But then, it happened; you were on your way. I prayerfully waited day by day. Five and a half months within me growing. Proudly knowing, greatly showing. Then came six and I felt some relief. Then, when you were born, you erased my grief. I became a mother and not just a wife. Your live birth, my child, Became the happiest day of my life. © December 23, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen Form: Narrative with rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/9/2011 2:23:00 PM
Dane Ann, when was your child born? Is it your only one? A very cool story. A belated Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:28:00 PM
Many congratulations for this beautiful write and win Dane.
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Date: 1/4/2011 7:02:00 PM
Congrats to you......you winner..you !! bitter sweet~touching~God bless ~rick
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Dane
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Date: 1/4/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this brilliant write and entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem with luv..
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Date: 1/4/2011 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 1/4/2011 1:10:00 PM
Beautifully told and congratulations on your 2nd place. We had the same theme, but you told it better. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/4/2011 12:55:00 PM
Such a heartfelt and touching poem! Congratulations, Dane Ann!!
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Date: 1/4/2011 11:34:00 AM
Beautiful poem of motherhood Dane. Congratulations on your honored 2nt place in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/4/2011 10:41:00 AM
very touching, probably true story...well written...congratulationson your win...Syd
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Date: 1/4/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win Dane Ann in my "Happiest Day Of My Life" contest. Thank you for entering and writing this wonderful poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 2:26:00 PM
Can you contact me at bjg2yes@comast.net..asap.. Im worried sick about CD...BG
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Date: 12/26/2010 1:49:00 PM
What a beautiful joyous poem dear poet !!! I so loved this write ! much love, james
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Date: 12/24/2010 11:48:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today.. Hope you have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years...
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:51:00 AM
Quite touching and oh so tender Dane Ann.. a special creation from your gifted pen.. enjoyed with luv.. happy holidays my friend..
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Date: 12/23/2010 7:15:00 AM
What a heartwarming poem....and yes...I can say the birth of my children as those happiest of days!! Merry Christmas, Dane Ann!
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:46:00 AM
What a wonderful flow of feelings of love for the child, Good luck in the contest, Dane
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Date: 12/23/2010 4:31:00 AM
i can feel with you on this one, dane... such spendind imagery you nourish us with,happy momma!! lots of winning luck in the contest! huggs, nette
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