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Oh Dear, What Can the Matter Be

Oh Dear, what can the matter be
Did my horse get stung by a bumblebee
He’s gone wild, dancing and kicking
When a while ago he was frolicking
Carefree and happy as a chickadee
Among meadow flowers up to his knee
Now his mane and his tail in full swing
Stirring up a heck of a wing ding
Showing less strategy than a flea
To hell with all grace and dignity


Submitted on January 30, 2018 for contest OH DEAR, WHAT CAN THE MATTER BE sponsored by BARRY STEBBINGS  -  RANKED 8TH

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Sandra Haight Date: 2/22/2018 9:50:00 AM Loved the ride, Line! Nice take on the theme and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/22/2018 11:50:00 AM Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Eve Roper Date: 2/16/2018 11:43:00 PM Congratulations on your win ,Line! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/17/2018 7:34:00 AM Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf Date: 2/16/2018 4:09:00 PM Excellent romp. Glad I don't have ride that buckin' bronc!! You are really racking up the wins, my friend! How much are you charging for autographs now? Can I get yours before I'm priced out of the market?...All the best, Gershon Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/16/2018 4:12:00 PM You are too funny, Gershon. You've got numerous other autographs to claim before mine tops your list. You are quite the charmer though...LOL

Barry Stebbings Date: 2/16/2018 1:45:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Line. // Barry Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/16/2018 2:11:00 PM Thank you, Barry. Silliness has its moments.

Janice Canerdy Date: 2/16/2018 8:32:00 AM Great response to the prompt, Line--CONGRATS! Janice Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/16/2018 8:42:00 AM Thanks, Janice. Much appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/30/2018 7:36:00 PM This is so much fun, I enjoyed this horsey ride! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/31/2018 12:04:00 AM Thank you for your visit, Richard. Much appreciated.

Lewis Raynes Date: 1/30/2018 7:11:00 PM sounds like the horse I had as a child, was mad, completely crazy, great writing Line Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/31/2018 12:05:00 AM Thanks for your visit, Lewis. Sounds like you survived your childhood well enough. LOL

Heidi Sands Date: 1/30/2018 5:38:00 PM This is great Line. Thanks for the fun laugh. :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/31/2018 12:06:00 AM Thank you so much, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Sunlite Wanter Date: 1/30/2018 4:59:00 PM Love it. Reminds me of the spring colts frolicking through the bluebonnets here in Texas. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/31/2018 12:07:00 AM Lovely imagery. Thanks for your visit, Sunlite.