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Written November 2022
Entered In The Premiere Contest, December 5, 2025 
“Complete Monorhyme” Sponsor, Hilo Poet

Premiere Contest WinnerOh, Christmas Tree

Oh, Christmas Tree, upon that hill you grew with others meant to flourish there in view. Beneath the sky where sunrays blend with blue and starry nights, as moonbeams shine in lieu- you now await your Christmastime debut. So soon, you will be chosen by us, who will bring you home indoors, and then pursue to dress you with fine trinkets, tinsel too make you the centerpiece that brings anew the spirit that our Christmas days imbue. Around you, neath your limbs, gifts will accrue all wrapped, and what's inside, there'll be no clue. How you are loved for standing- staunch and true- while lending beauty with your brilliant hue. But oh, your days will end, as we all knew. Stripped bare- that time will halt your rendezvous. You served your purpose- so, what's left to do but lay you out to rest- dried limbs askew. In this short life, your promise lived up to rekindling joy as Christmastime passed through. Oh, Christmas Tree, your time with us fast flew, yet, you'll still shine- in thankful thoughts of you.
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Peck Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 11:36 AM
I love your beautiful poem - or requiem for a tree meeting its destiny. Sad, isn't it, that we can't let the tree be.
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December 22, 2025 at 3:37 AM
A beautiful poem for Christmas Sandra, a most delightful read… Beryl
Williams Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 3:13 PM
What a magnificent, beautiful poem. It brought me such joy reading it. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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December 15, 2025 at 1:26 PM
Congrats on your work placing in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
Watts Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 1:12 PM
hi Sandra. Congratulations on a great monorhyne Christmas tree poem Read well and described Christmas nicely Cheers Christine
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 11:47 AM
A very pleasant rhyming monorhyme poem, with my compliments on your well-earned trophy win in my Complete Singular Monorhyme Poetry Contest, Aloha, William.
La France Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 1:09 AM
Sandra, a magical and breathtaking poem, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Write A Christmas Poem, well done, I love the image too, blessings
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