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December 26, 2021
Placed 1st: A Strand (Dec 26) Contest


 

Oh, splendorous, spectacular, resplendent autumn! Boldly you dye cypress ~ flaunting ochre, cinnamon, Yellowing sugar-maple, glazing tangerine emotions, As scarlet winds warble in accents of majestic aspens, Responding in purple whispers, tupelo leaves flutter Reminiscing in revelries evoked by red-oak crimson Lingering in blazing meadows, enchanting red maple. Oh, autumn! fly me there, into depths of the season, Frolicking upon gamboge hills, wrap me in your vision, Tour with me dazzling terrains of flamboyant foliage Composing deep pleasure in brilliant changing colors, Hang your portrait upon cobalt cliffs of ruby horizon Painting blushing hearts in amber hints of setting sun, Mindful still of wistful shudders quivering barren trees And unsung withering yearnings of falling golden leaves, Aspiring blossoming kisses--on lips of flowering spring.

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Date: 1/5/2024 12:52:00 PM
Wonderful poetry my friend.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:28:00 AM
How picturesque is your way of painting imagery dear Vijay! Im truly in awe of the way you’ve woven words using colors etc to describe autumn in such a captivating manner! I love the way this flows with such exquisite rhythm, depicting nature in the most finest strokes, as i see through your words what you’ve delivered. I especially love the last lines left me truly in awe! How unique and artistic! Pleasure reading this brilliant poem. Definitely a fave for me, congratulations on your win too
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Date: 6/6/2023 11:07:00 AM
A beautifully imagined verse, replete with delightful autumn colors. This is a fave.
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Date: 2/19/2022 10:16:00 PM
I Love this... Beautifully written Vijay, a favorite for sure. Congratulations on your win, well deserved! ~Anna
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2022 6:05:00 AM
So very kind of you Anna--so special to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 1/22/2022 10:06:00 AM
Wow congratulations Vijay your selection of words to paint these vivid images in ones mind is surreal. Congratulations on your winning placement...
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Michael Tor
Date: 1/22/2022 10:08:00 AM
Vijay consider writing a book of poetry. Your writing skills transcend many...
Date: 1/14/2022 5:11:00 PM
I am so glad to see this fave of mine at the top of the best new poems list Vijay. Congratulations! xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2022 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Connie. Much appreciate your FAVE my friend. It got to #1 for a short time.
Date: 1/13/2022 4:41:00 AM
Gamboge hills; purple whispers ...What a colorful write. A face for sure. Peace, ShalOm
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Date: 1/13/2022 9:15:00 AM
Glad you could visit with your kind remarks, Anil. Much appreciate. Many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 1/11/2022 3:24:00 PM
You depict the elation that this season's beauty brings to the human heart. Well crafted word-painting.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/13/2022 9:13:00 AM
Much appreciate MLK--many thanks.
Date: 1/5/2022 2:00:00 PM
Are you sure you're not an artist ? Cuz this views like a poetic image of golden . Thankyou Vijay, :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2022 5:57:00 AM
Thank you Vienna--much appreciate.
Date: 1/4/2022 6:51:00 AM
Oh Autumn we could hold hands with this winsome and lovely Autumnscape! Glory!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2022 10:50:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem Kim. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks my friend.
Date: 1/4/2022 5:02:00 AM
What an exquisite evocative portrayal of the splendid Autumn season you have created with your brilliant creativity Vijayji... Enjoyed reading, especially, as in India we never get to see the beauty of Autumn... Hope you are having a great new week of the New Year... God bless... ~ Ani
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2022 10:49:00 AM
Always a joy to read your insightful comments, Ani. Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Haven't seen your poems lately. Many thanks. My very best to you for the new year.
Date: 1/3/2022 6:03:00 PM
I love the autumn so very much. Your amazing pen wrote this so elegantly. It is winter here now, though very mild, it still feels like winter to me. I simply basked in this beautiful poem. I am saving it to my favorites <3
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Date: 1/5/2022 10:48:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, BJ. A special treat and an honor to receive your FAVE. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 1/3/2022 12:39:00 PM
Autumn is my favorite season and your beautiful description has captured it well :) ~ps
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thank you PS. Much appreciate.
Date: 1/3/2022 6:18:00 AM
Spendorous, spectacular, resplendent Poetry is this... So beautifully penned and I loved every line... Wish you a very happy New year...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2022 2:44:00 PM
So very kind of you Supraja--much appreciate your generous feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 1/2/2022 12:46:00 PM
Definitely a fave! I love autumn and this poem - amazing poetry. God bless you and Happy New Year. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/3/2022 2:44:00 PM
Honored to receive your FAVE, Gina. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 1/2/2022 6:44:00 AM
Vijay, this is a vividly descriptive, expressive tribute to fall! Janice
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Date: 1/3/2022 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 1/1/2022 4:08:00 PM
You paint Autumn with such color and personality; beautiful lines, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2022 6:04:00 PM
So very kind of you, MLK. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 1/1/2022 1:25:00 PM
"As scarlet winds warble in accents of majestic aspens", You weave the colors beautifully in this splendid write Vijay, Happy New Year!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2022 2:11:00 PM
Happy New Year, Joseph. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 12/31/2021 2:04:00 PM
- Joyful and beautiful, Vijay :) - I wish you and your family a happy new year 2022 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2022 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate. Wish you a very happy new year.
Date: 12/31/2021 5:34:00 AM
Indeed another splendid offering, Vijay! Your gorgeous arrays of colours drip from every line! ~ Best wishes for the new tear, my friend! // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate. My very best to you for the new year, Paul.
Date: 12/30/2021 5:08:00 PM
Powerful?? read. Good morning, Vijay Happy New Year
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2021 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Arjun--much appreciate.
Date: 12/30/2021 6:18:00 AM
I left a comment that I see has disappeared. This poem is so splendorous Vijay. A Fave for me my friend! New year blessings! xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2021 6:23:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate. My very best to you for the new year, Connie.
Date: 12/29/2021 1:05:00 PM
Superb poetry, my friend, Vijay! Happy New Year!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/31/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate. Happy New Year to you.
Date: 12/29/2021 7:16:00 AM
Oh Autumn. I didn’t want it to end. Now I can relive it in your beautiful words. A fave for me Vijay. With thanks, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/29/2021 7:32:00 AM
That is so delightful to hear from you SuZ. Much appreciate your visit and insightful remarks. A FAVE from you is special treat my friend. Many thanks for stopping by. My very best to you for the new year.
Date: 12/29/2021 6:01:00 AM
As we bid adieu to Autumn once again, your splendorous imagery flows throughout this majestic write Vijay! As always, you have filled the page with stunning verse! Happy New Year!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/29/2021 7:30:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Mike. Many thanks, as always.
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