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Oh, This Sweet Love

It's Valentine's Day and I have something real special planned, for my darling, darling sweet love! It will be such a romantic evening for us two, all day I have been beautified; it began with a bubble bath, oh, the jasmine scented water was so tranquil and divine! I have cooked a yummy meal- his most loved, and have his favourite deep red wine. There are jasmine scented candles burning in every single room, I have brushed my hair shiny, and my lips are ruby red; I will be wearing only a red satin slip and red high heels! the bed has purple silk sheets, the curtains are drawn closed. Then, at last his key is turning the lock, and I am ready to be held in his strong arms. Oh, he is standing there smelling of the outdoors, fresh and clean, in his hand, a perfect bouquet of red roses, and a heart shaped box of chocolates! He looks so handsome and I love him so much, "and love is in the air tonight!" On our minds, and in our kisses! The meal is lovely, the wine delicious; his sweet, loving words sublime, and we are kissing, oh this sweet love- and I am falling, falling, falling . . . weeping, weeping, weeping in my bed, it was just a dream of another Valentine's night. Tomorrow, I will walk in the deep snow and lay, a red rose on his grave- and my love will fill the air . . . ____________________ January 10, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/Oh, This Sweet Love Copyright Protected, ID 01-8649-17-10 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Love Is In The Air Tonight sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judged 01/20107 First Place

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Date: 2/6/2017 12:33:00 PM
Congrats on first place!
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:19:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win. You carried me so far with the beginning and the end...oh! so heart wrenching. You are one those talented! Well done. :)
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Date: 2/4/2017 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the first placement of the contest.
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Date: 1/11/2017 7:19:00 AM
Such a beautiful, love filled poetic offering that left me in tears at the end. So very sad was the conclusion but thankfully, those memories have turned to dreams and that is something that can never be taken away from you.
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