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Oh, So Cute

Once upon a time, I was an only child, for eight lovely years, it was all about me, then it happened, the most terrible thing ever, my Mom gave birth to a bouncing baby boy. She soon came home from the hospital, hugging her bundle of joy close to her heart, I peered into the bundle, honestly what was the, big deal, he was wrinkled up like an old prune. As the days past his cheeks grew chubby, he had soft, wispy hair on his head and his body filled out all cute, just like the Gerber baby, at least that is what everyone would say when viewing him. Gosh, why did he have to be so cuddly, always cooing and laughing with those bright eyes of his, blowing bubbles and taking every ones attention, and why, oh why did I love him so much. _______________________ January 19, 2013 Poetry/Narrative/Oh, So Cute Copyright Protected, ID 01-450-659-19 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Date: 2/5/2013 12:17:00 AM
Sisters adore their baby brothers. Lovely poem!
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Date: 2/3/2013 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Constance luv xx
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:39:00 PM
hmmm, for some reason, the first time I saw this on the list, I was thinking it had come in at around 3rd place. Well, it is no matter. AT least I finally saw it and for me it's a top place!
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:36:00 PM
constance, this is absolutely adorable and most deserving of a top win. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:37:00 PM
congratulations Constance..
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:23:00 PM
ConstanceCongratulations on a job well done. Enjoyed the cute and beautiful baby poems. I hope you do not mind that I embraced the amusement of this contest with my 13 year old son. Always and forever ~ LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2013 6:46:00 PM
Such a delightful poem to read.....from the point of view of a big sister. So sweet and endearing! Congratulations Constance!
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Date: 1/26/2013 5:56:00 PM
awww, love this sweet write, Constance. Hope you are feeling great today and much warmer x
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Date: 1/19/2013 2:51:00 PM
Reminds me of my younger brother, though he was no Gerber baby, I was the Gerber baby in the family, ha ha ha! Yeah, I was somewhat jealous but I had the same issues you did, he was love darn loveable! What a special write this poem really is myy friend! I truly loved reading this pleasurable piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/19/2013 12:34:00 PM
Reminds me of when my brother was born, he is 6 years younger than me. - Happiness ... NO!! ... not for me ..... "Throw him in the trash" ... Said little Anne-Lise at 6 years - Have a lovely weekend. - Good luck in the contest Constance. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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