Oh, Go Away Yesterday

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Yesterday, we said our goodbyes wind blew lies on forsaken eyes In spite fury of nothing dies Oh, go away yesterday I loved you dear, and days before a bleak lifeless flower no more rendered breathless, numb evermore Oh, go away yesterday The recent past, held many words some harmony, some sharpen swords My destiny through silver chords Oh, go away yesterday Emotions packed, dreams I foresee. Pebbles on this glee path to be, I learned the truth of being free. Oh, go away yesterday 5/11/2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 6:31:00 PM

Well done, Eve. Congrats on your win.

James Inman

Date: 5/19/2018 8:13:00 AM

Very smooth, emotional write Eve.

Constance La France

Date: 5/15/2018 2:42:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest, there is nothing like freedom, well done ~

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/15/2018 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win,Eve.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/14/2018 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement with this sad but hopeful poem.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/14/2018 3:45:00 PM

Returning with huge congratulations on your win! Well-deserved! Hugs. Pandita

Curtis Moorman

Date: 5/14/2018 3:00:00 PM

Freedom usually comes at a great price. A price that is difficult to pay but teaches a valuable lesson for the future. Congratulations on this tremendous entry.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2018 2:49:00 PM

My friend, you have done wonders with those challenging words turning them into a work of pure brilliance! Excellent piece that will surely top the chart! Hugs. Pandita