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Oh, Captain, Captain

You think there will be a next time? You've betrayed my trust It feels like it was all lust to you and I can not stand These emotions at hand I don't want to hurt So why would I revert back to this again?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/6/2009 10:12:00 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Echo. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2009 6:51:00 AM
Interesting thoughts and advice put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Book: Shattered Sighs