Oh, Captain, Captain

You think there will be a next time?
You've betrayed my trust
It feels like it was all lust
to you and I can not stand
These emotions at hand
I don't want to hurt
So why would I revert
back to this again?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 6, 2009 at 10:12 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Echo. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol
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November 5, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Interesting thoughts and advice put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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