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Ogre

I’m not much of an ogre he thought As a chipmunk nibbled his twisted toe nail. Nope, I like my fur fluffed and clean And my nails…well, not painted But neatly buffed and filed. Damn! I hate meat. It like Forever sticks in my teeth. I think I’m a reincarnated vegan. Toughen up kid!! Grab that ogre vibe Dinner will be anything We can catch alive. (worst hunting mantra ever) An old owl shook its head Asked its forever question: ”Who?.. are you?” He drives me nuts Every day Same old question. Until… That one day he said “Who do you want to be?” I confusedly answered: “I am not sure.” “Then go and find out” He hooted As silent wings Took flight. ©3/24/2024 Writing Challenge – “O” Words Poetry Contest Constance La France – Sponsor

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Date: 3/27/2023 10:53:00 AM
- A great poem, John - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:45:00 PM
Love this John! Clever and cute. I love your hunting mantra LOL Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:01:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words, a very good poem, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/25/2023 6:22:00 PM
Love how you set this poem up, John. First from the perspective of the ogre, the humor throughout, and the unexpected, contemplative ending…brilliant! :)
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Date: 3/24/2023 11:36:00 PM
This is great, reads like a contender to the Gruffulo as well as the contest!
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Date: 3/24/2023 8:02:00 PM
Poor Ogre, confused like a lot of us until we meet our owl. Entertaing read with great closing lines...enjoyed. All the best.
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