Off With the Head

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Off with the head, so full of noise High time that we tame it Ego cravings make us lose poise Blocking rise to summit Once was boon, now is bane Brain drain is not in vain Soul glistens, free of stain Choose heart instead Off with the head 01-October-2021 Quietus

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/1/2021 2:27:00 AM

5O OF ONE AND FIFTY OF THE OTHER, EQUALLY IMPORTANT I GUESS BUT AS YOU SAY, SHOULD COMPROMISE BETWEEN THEM THAT THEY ARE EQUALLY BALANCED AND AS NECESSARY TO ONE ANOTHER. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/1/2021 4:21:00 AM

True, when head and heart align, inner conflict ends

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/30/2021 10:39:00 PM

It will be a controversy. The heart is sentimental, the head is reason.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/30/2021 11:56:00 PM

True, so they should be in balance, aligned and in resonance with voice of conscience & love