Off To See the Wizard

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I Would be Honored to Have Courage I just watch my owners talk. They walk back, stand and gawk. Sunflower smiles they are in awe; to them I am just a pile of clothes filled with straw. They hang me on a wooden cross, so don't light a match. They stake me in the middle of a garden patch, to shoo crows away as they raid, but they make me so afraid. They take great pleasure plucking my straw with their sharp claws as they swoop down and away with a caw. The moon comes up and I come alive; everything around me erupt. A fluttering in the distance night owl-lights up the barn while grandma balled up her woolen yarn. A lonely fox echoes, but he means no harm through the still silence of the farm. A huffing wind blows raising the flaps of my clothes lifted me up from the cross and tossed me on the ground. I heard the crying sounds of a girl as she found me on the ground. I told her I am so afraid she decided to come to my aid. She said, "We will walk together down the yellow brick road, no matter the weather to see the Wizard of Oz. He will give you courage so, don't let this discourage you. She bent down picked up Toto together we were a perfect photo.
10/30/2018 Poetry Contest: OFF TO SEE THE WIZARD Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 12/10/2018 12:43:00 PM
Ah! Eve, this was beautiful. I love the Scarecrow and your picture attached just made me visualize the entire poem perfectly. Thank you and congratulations on your win :) x
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Date: 12/6/2018 5:59:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/6/2018 5:27:00 AM
CONGRATS Eve. I always admire yournice composition. Love n Regards.
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Date: 12/5/2018 10:26:00 PM
Wonderful write, and those last two lines are just precious! Congrats on your win in the contest. Season's best! ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/5/2018 4:22:00 PM
Nice write Eve, loved it.
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Date: 12/5/2018 3:57:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest with this nifty poem. I enjoyed it. Carole :D
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Date: 12/5/2018 8:58:00 AM
I love this, Eve! You paint us a picture of a frightened scarecrow! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2018 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve..
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Date: 12/5/2018 6:06:00 AM
I love this poem, Eve. However I didn't see where you were a new character so I awarded you a 2nd place win. Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest...Happy Holidays :) Charlie
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Date: 11/18/2018 5:49:00 PM
Eve, such a beautifully penned story, I was captivated, best of luck in the contest and well done ~
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Date: 11/2/2018 8:44:00 AM
Your rhyme and flow are quite catchy, excellent job there, and the story flows so well. To me your poem was like visiting friends I've had since childhood and I enjoyed every second. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 10/31/2018 1:02:00 PM
Sometimes courage comes from the last straw! Good luck! Aloha, Rico
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Date: 10/31/2018 8:49:00 AM
This is great, I like this poetic marvel, ironic that the Scarecrow is scared.
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Date: 10/31/2018 8:32:00 AM
Enchanting and magical my friend. I love the poem and that last line and how it brings the photo you posted into play. Really nice. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 10/30/2018 7:35:00 PM
absolutely charming Eve:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2018 7:27:00 PM
Ah, you did an amazing recant of the original story , I will walk the brick road with you and together we can ask for whatever our heart wants and needs, lets' go , Eve.
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