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But here's another odd item, one that gives me a very funny, almost queasy feeling, whenever I think on it long enough. Ever since that day with Clarence, whenever I go to the park pond to feed the birds, and when I finish at the shore with the swans, (as I promised Clarence I would), and go up to the bench to feed the pigeons, that funny little duck with the striped leg, the one I now call Grace, always follows me, and either sits down by my foot, or sometimes, jumps up to the bench to warm in the late-day sun. And the REAL kicker? There's a NEW duck now, a drake or male, and he's always tagging along behind the female, though at a safe distance from me ... he follows her everywhere, always watching what she does, always very intent on her habits, and sometimes even getting flustered when he thinks she's near danger ... and he has two bright orange legs, like she does, two very striking, piercing eyes, like her, two perfectly shaped Mallard wings, like her, and ONE ... single ... stripe, on his left leg.

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Date: 6/14/2017 9:15:00 AM
This Narrative is wonderful, intriguing, and cool. It is mysterious, has a real, emotional and moving story to back it up too. And most of all, I can hear YOU, Greg talk, just as you normally do, so I do love that a lot. I can see you sit on that bench, with that man, without him, with the ducks and the pigeons, and know that it's them. It made me smile :)
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:14:00 PM
Thank you SO much, My Friend - I haven't been back here in a while, cuz folks just didn't seem to care for this story much, for whatever reasons ... I'm so glad you DID! It was a lot of work. :-)
Date: 6/12/2017 6:11:00 AM
I greatly appreciate those who take the time to read the story ... for why read the end without reading the rest?? That's like scraping the frosting off the cake! ;-)
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