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Of Reality

Reality is a three way mirror of naked truth with the total absence of any beauty. One Sentence Metaphor Sponsored by: Jesse Rowe

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Date: 8/4/2019 8:53:00 PM
A potent and poetically expressed reality check, Janis. A striking thought-provoking piece. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/4/2019 11:25:00 AM
3-way mirror, perfect! yes, it is... stark reality! excellent! congratulations!
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Date: 8/2/2019 8:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Good write.
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Date: 8/2/2019 7:27:00 AM
So true that reality bears no trace of judgement and that's exactly what beauty is - perspective, interpretation and judgment. Congrats on your podium finish, Janis.
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Date: 8/2/2019 6:51:00 AM
Janis, congrats on your win for this wonderfully written piece. John
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Date: 8/2/2019 6:23:00 AM
Wow. A great win. The first half of this I loved. Not sure I agree totally with last part. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 8/1/2019 11:27:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your 2nd place finish in my contest. This jarring depiction of reality just shook me and demanded my attention. Your poem needed no more words than you used to draw your comparison. Well done.
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