Of Mice, Women and Santa

Once there was a very tiny mouse.
       Who came to live in a very large house.
He made a nest inside the wall.
       And had lots of fun running up and down the hall.
 
There came a time when he smelled some cheese,
       And he climbed the table and was very pleased.
For sitting there in the middle, was a big plate of Swiss.
       And he made a dive and couldn't hardly miss.
 
He was enjoying himself and had had his fill.
       When a lady came in and started to squeal.
She was very tall and very slim,
       She reached for the cheese plate to try to catch him.
 
He was quick as a wink and flew out of her reach.
       Jumped into a fruit bowl and onto a peach.
The peach was so fuzzy, he let out a squeek.
       Then trying to hide was quite a big feat.

The lady kept looking but it was in vain.
       For the mouse was now hidden behind a glass pane.
She finally gave up and went back to her work.
       But once in a while you could see her head jerk.

For out of the corner of her eye she was spying,
       to get a glimpse of any movement trying.
He tiptoed so quietly back into the hall.
       And the lady never noticed and soon left for the mall.

He knew from now on, he would have to be cautious.
       and not do anything that would make people nautious.
He kept himself clean, that is, clean as a mouse could.
       He didn't leave droppings as he knew other mice would.

He kept to himself until one Christmas Eve.
       When he heard what he thought was a message to leave.
Dear Santa had stopped by this large house so fine.
        And had been ask by this lady to dine.

The mouse knew who Santa was and saw his big pack.
       And decided to hide in it before Santa came back.
He found a nice place, inside of a shoe.
       And fell fast asleep before he even knew.

Adventure was his on that magical night.
       Dear Santa took him on a marvelous flight.
And when it was over, he decided to stay.
       With dear Santa, who carried him home with him, that day.



For Anything Goes contest by Constance La France
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Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Marty. Love, Carol
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March 16, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Good one- big Smiles
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January 14, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Hey Marty! Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Anything Goes" Contest! Thank you also for your always kind comments on my poems! Peace and love, Audrey
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January 13, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Lovely read. Very nice. Congratulations too. Have a great day! Scarlett
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January 11, 2010 at 5:22 PM
congradulations. jhl
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:24 AM
1st Place Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Marty. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 11:30 PM
Awesome story, Marty. Love it! Congratulations on you first place win in Constance's contest and thank you for sharing . Love, Lainie
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January 5, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Congratulations Marty on your first place finish with this delightful poem. Hapy New Year. Joyce
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January 3, 2010 at 5:39 PM
So happy to see you won with this CHARMING little mouse tale! Luv, andrea
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January 3, 2010 at 8:20 AM
HOORAY FOR YOU AND YOUR WIN, MARTY!! What an entertaining and fine poem, so glad I didn't miss it, it almost slipped by me! Congratulations,!!.......Love, Carrie
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December 31, 2009 at 8:16 PM
just an awesome dear poem with great rhyme scheme, Marty. They ought to do an animated cartoon about it. -Robert
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December 31, 2009 at 4:16 PM
great story, good one.
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December 11, 2009 at 11:07 AM
raw talent. John H Loving III
Thomas Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 5:56 AM
Great story, and good luck in the contest! ~Juliane
Haick Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 9:47 PM
A delghtful one filled with great imagery! I love this! Goes to my favs.! Peace and love, Audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 4:21 PM
that is very cute, nice short story!!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 10:01 PM
Thats not the poem I entered in the contest.. its Christmas Reflections Remembered down further in my list.. its the acrostic for the contest... don't mean to make u crazy ...but.... "Sweetheart"
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December 2, 2009 at 9:03 PM
What a great story, Marty, and good luck in the contest.. my entry is Musical Melodies.. if u care to read.. this contest is so fun and enjoyed reading this one... got Soup Mail from Jimmy today ... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" check out MoonBee's tribute poem to me Linda-Marie & Tasty Soup....
Bono Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 11:32 AM
wow,It's a winner for sure.Very nicely done.
Pickett Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 8:11 AM
Beautiful tale friend... Keep that ink flowing friend....:JP]
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December 2, 2009 at 6:43 AM
Marty your never hesitate to amaze me with your writes..indeed a lovely humorous fun to read poem--Charma
Nutter Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 2:43 AM
Excellent write, I could envision this broken down into a childrens book. With the proper illustrator could be a big seller at Christmas time. Thanks for your comments on my poetry.
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December 1, 2009 at 9:15 PM
That is so cool, Marty! I love this story, very well written and fun to read. You got my vote on this one. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comment on my poetic story, "The Mountaineer". I will post more of those kinds of stories. Caroline.
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