Of Love Perverse

For you and only you, my love, I’ll wait. I’ll wait through evening’s dusk to early dawn. On corners or at stations; by my gate I’ve waited - and at night with curtains drawn. The hands of time keep moving, stroke by stroke. My calendar I’ve marked and then remarked. What muse of tempering may I invoke to cool these everlasting flames you’ve sparked? Please come to me, unholy knight of love! I cling to threadbare promises you made. My tarrying I've grown so weary of while off again you go on some crusade. Fine gallant you are not, but - oh, perverse! A heart grown fonder lingering is my curse. (What I should have written to an old crush of mine whose modern day crusades consumed his life!)
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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 10:08 PM
Congratulations on your first placement in Brian's contest Andrea. I can see why he chose this for a top winner. xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Andrea, lovely poem filled with the anguish of love not returned. Wonderful images - "threadbare promises" This is a feeling all of us can relate to as we see our dreams of a possibility just not become real. Congratulations on your first place.
Watt Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Back to say a hearty congrats for your #1 win on one of your finest sonnets.
Watt Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:57 PM
Pure poetry. The one that got away... such a timeless theme. I can think of a couple individuals who incited these feelings in me (long ago, I should add!) Happy memories, or unrequited regret, hmmm. Love "What muse of tempering may I invoke / to cool these everlasting flames you’ve sparked?" Great, great sonnet from the mistress of sonnets.
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 1:02 PM
My congratulations Andrea, well done...
Gupta Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations for your nice win for this beautiful poem ...
Carmack Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 3:57 AM
Congrats Andrea. I really liked "A heart grown fonder lingering is my curse."
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Congratulations Andrea in the placement of the contest.
A  Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. SKAT
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win! I'm sure your poem touched many--including me--who remember trusting someone whose promises were never to be fulfilled! Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Wonderful expressions Andrea! Congrats on big win!
Konos Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations.....
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 1:07 PM
dropping back with my congrats again:-) hugs Jan xx
Nunez Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Really enjoyed this one, Andie. Congrats! Hmmn...should have entered too my poem of same title as the theme which won in Charlotte's contest before. You gave me an idea. Thanks and hugs!
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 8:02 PM
ANDREA, ONCE AGAIN Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 12:14 PM
A beautiful sonnet Andrea - I wonder what would have transpired if you had written it sooner. Personally I would have liked to see it place MUCH higher than an HM:-( Hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 6:59 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...Congrats on the win
Ackerson Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 10:30 PM
I like it and congrats! ...poems are always looked at with one eye.
Gorelick Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Well, this just goes to show you how different judges see our poems. It was a big winner before and an HM now..go figure. As always, congrats...BG
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Your comment is very much appreciated. I am having a bad week at Soup all around. hahaha. Maybe my moon sign is in a bad house or something!
A  Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your awesome win! ~SKAT~
Stoner Jr Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 9:36 PM
Congratulations Andrea on this successfully write.
Omara Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 10:44 PM
You should have written it to him, Andrea. It would have been irresistible.-Red
Quigley Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:00 AM
This is beautiful Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
Taylor Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Nice going. I have been inactive on PS since Aug, due to my wifes serious illness. Thanks for your comments. Take care and God bless. luv, Ralph
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