Notes About The Poem

Of Irreconcilable Differences

it’s been so long
your silence deafening

we’ve become strangers
lurking in stifling
indifference
of meaningless
irreconcilable
emptiness

in stagnant stillness
the cord cut
dried up
the bond
disintegrated



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Romios Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 2:02 AM
Silence drives me crazy. Forsooth, another will come along OR it does end. Showing off my knowledge of Old Engllish, just being silly...not being a pompous asp.)) Panagiota
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Forsooth, of course. LOL
Allison Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 8:34 AM
silence can be deafening - can spell the end to a relationship when couples no longer are communicating:-( even though hubby is away all week we speak every day and text and mail, he's not back now until 14th June will be tough as he's been home every weekend until; next weekend but we are coping fine and his treatment is going well:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 10:41 AM
That's great news. This poem can also apply to family members and friends who go rogue without explanation.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Silence doth speaks volumes Line, Aloha William
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, William.
One Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 7:13 AM
There are always two sides to silence...
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Or more... Thanks for your visit and comment, SO.
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