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Of Infinity

In the land of finite, measurable calculus of existence, You are a silhouette of mystique, esoteric obscurity, A symbol ambiguous, living among realm of precision, Unreachable to quotidian and simplistic enumeration, Unamenable to honoring bounds of constrained world; Yet, allured in metaphors, much alike a pretty woman, Serenaded by poetic adulation in verses of fascination. We invoke you when enormity we can’t comprehend Being clueless of its reach or whether its journey ends: Numbers uncountable, we postulate, seek your vicinity, Universe we can’t grasp, we claim, expands infinitely, Time propelling future, we surmise, ticks into eternity, Whether space or distance you’re un-fathomed entity; Oh! Infinity, the truth is, we can’t clasp your immensity. Why, O, why you chase the unknown and the elusive? Such a dry emotion to be everlasting without feelings! Being eternal or endless ~offers not a beloved meaning Unless you can be sensual, evermore of love romantic Or the vows tolling forever in unbreakable relationships Or timelessly striving to create treasures of memories Or a paradise on earth blooming heavenly, perpetually. Oh! Infinity, be laudable as can be, to instincts of poetry But, remain true to self ~unknowable, nebulous intrigue. November 22, 2021 Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 8 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: Of Infinity

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Date: 2/10/2022 9:29:00 AM
A work like that of slow, methodical artists like Michelangelo. I'm a peasant-poet, simpler and closer to a mass market, or masses. Keep write on, Maestro (& my fave topic, Universe & infinity). Om shalom PTL
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Date: 1/17/2022 9:04:00 AM
WoW!! Mere words can't adequately describe this ink masterpiece. A quill job well done, my friend. Love and more love always.
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Date: 12/22/2021 6:21:00 PM
Dear Vijay, your masterful and magical pen spills incredible splendor. Such magnificence, your soulful artistry fills the creative page with poetry that takes my breath away! Every poetic line is rich with the gem-light luster I find irresistible.. A Fav! Congratulations for a worthy and well-deserved win in Edward's contest. Warmest wishes for you and yours to enjoy a merry Christmas, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/16/2021 7:28:00 AM
My favorite line before the close, "Oh! Infinity, the truth is, we can’t clasp your immensity". But we can wrap ourselves in the intrique and mystery of you. Well written and great analogies, Vijay. I also loved the close, "Oh! Infinity, be laudable as can be, to instincts of poetry But, remain true to self ~unknowable, nebulous intrigue." Ecellent! great entry for contest. Your poet friend, Bill P.S. Now I see you deserve congrats for win. :-) wtg, Vijay!
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Date: 12/14/2021 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Infinity" is something we are still trying to understand. Guess our minds cannot see it so many do not believe it. It is in God's world. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 12/6/2021 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your win. For me no surprise. So glad I too could share the first place with you.... !
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Date: 12/5/2021 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this outstanding personification poem Vijay:-) Your poetry is always on point, my friend. I'm faving it!
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Date: 12/4/2021 7:47:00 AM
We should be able to apply infinite and eternal to a total feeling of true and absolute love of God, a person, an animal or nature. Kudos dear Vijay, such a profound topic you chose, and I feel that you above all, could explain in this poetic gem, how you apply eternity and infinity and point out that it should be laudable to our poetic instincts and ability. wonderful poetry dear friend, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/1/2021 7:36:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. If it is endless then we as humans can't understand it but some day all things will be within our reach. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2021 4:24:00 PM
I agree with Anitha. An excellent write on infinity, Vijay. I saw another excellent one earlier today as well. I think sam wrote it. I bet you both will get a win!
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Date: 11/24/2021 6:10:00 AM
Oh my, what an excellent write Vijayji exploring such a difficult topic: "Infinity"....from a genius poetic mind...I loved the way you began your poem..."In the land of finite.......esoteric obscurity"...So many lines my fav...a unique beautiful personification..."being eternal or endless offers not a beloved meaning..."...such brilliant weaving of words...A fav...God Bless..~ Ani
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Date: 11/24/2021 7:12:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Ani. Coming from you-- it's a special treat to receive such a delightful feedback. A special treat as well to receive a FAVE from you. Much appreciate, as always, your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 11/24/2021 3:43:00 AM
The "magnitude" of infinity is pending on the greatness of one's understanding, my friend, Vijay. The more one's mind is able to understand, the less one is able to conceive it, while the less one understands the more he believes he can conceive it! A fave!
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Date: 11/24/2021 7:08:00 AM
Always enlightening my friend to read your thoughts. Much appreciate your thoughtful feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks for your visit and comments. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 11/23/2021 10:22:00 AM
You explored the unexplored...and well done too...with great ideas.
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Date: 11/23/2021 12:55:00 PM
So hard to explore infinity. Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback, Arturo. Many thanks.
Date: 11/23/2021 10:20:00 AM
Vijay, this dynamic write indeed explores the nature of infinity in gorgeous images and musings that challenge the spirit. This is sure to be found high on the winners list! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you all the blessings of the season. Happy Thanksgiving.
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Date: 11/23/2021 12:54:00 PM
So very nice of you to say so Sam. Much appreciate your complimentary feedback and your vote of confidence. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 11/22/2021 10:03:00 PM
You have clearly penned the infinite meaning of infinity, Vijay:) should place high:)
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Date: 11/23/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Jo. Glad you stopped by. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 11/22/2021 9:20:00 PM
There are many things in this world, and beyond, that we will never understand. (Which is perfectly okay). If they were meant to be visible, they would be. Some mystery is good for the imagination. Once again, you have created a Masterpiece, my dear friend. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/23/2021 5:52:00 AM
Well said my friend: If they were meant to be visible, they would be. Some mystery is good for the imagination. Much appreciate your complimentary remarks, Brandy. Many thanks for your thoughtful feedback.
Date: 11/22/2021 5:58:00 PM
We try to get our arms around it, but it remains elusive as ever -- although I think that the Congressmen in Washington could spend Infinity Dollars if they could just take the poor populace a little more! lol. Brilliant write, Vijay. Blessings and Bounty, Gershon
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Date: 11/23/2021 5:50:00 AM
So true--it remains elusive. Much appreciate your thoughts, Gershon. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 11/22/2021 12:57:00 PM
A deep, thought provoking poem Vijay. Great writing here ! :)
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Date: 11/22/2021 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 11/22/2021 6:50:00 AM
Bless you, Vijay, for brilliantly capturing our nimble feeling of eternity!  ! Striving to grasp infinity one bite at a time is like draining the oceans one swallow at once. As usual, fantastic viewpoints are partnered by predictable imagery and metaphors.
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Date: 11/22/2021 9:12:00 AM
So nice to hear that from you, Lasaad. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always. Many thanks.
Date: 11/22/2021 5:18:00 AM
Vijay, you have captured for me, our nimble concept of infinity so very well! Nebulous intrigue is just so perfect a losing! Good Luck, I'm sure this is winner!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2021 9:11:00 AM
Glad you stopped by Mike with your kind remarks. Much appreciate your supportive comments. Many thanks.
Date: 11/22/2021 3:52:00 AM
So difficulty to imagine what infinity is. I give an example. Walk around the world a million times and you have not yet started your journey. Great thoughts with the normal expectancy of of images and metaphors.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2021 9:10:00 AM
So true what you say about about its vastness and intrigue, Victor. Much appreciate your illustration that is on mark. Many thanks, as always.
Date: 11/22/2021 3:34:00 AM
This poem is as intriguing as eternity ! The lofty style suits so well for the lofty theme. Trying to understand eternity is like trying to drain out the ocean in spoonfuls. It could be this or that.... ! A 'nebulous intrigue' ! Stunning write dear friend!
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Date: 11/22/2021 9:07:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your insightful thoughts. Much appreciate your visit and feedback, as always. Many thanks, Valsa.

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