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Of Fair Weather

Of fair weather, it holds me in its charms. Godspeed of June, be jealous for light rays. She’s heard my plea, now let me play and smile. The pleasantries; hotlanta held at bay. And withstanding the green and merry glow, the yellow blooms, the aha reds, sky blues, I reminisce and kiss and sigh, soaring with feet of dendrites’ pulse and oxygen. The rush of oaks, maples, and bonny crépes; the sweep of wind through open drive - alive! The ferny mimosas, feathery pink - Sensations flip; I’m head-to-toe, euphoric. Teeter-totter…not yet! The sun’s broadcast will keep the mornings cool - ‘lanta in June!

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Date: 6/8/2025 5:30:00 PM
So positive, even though I know you're going through a lot, " feet of dendrites" wish you an awesome evening- take care to prop those feet up!! <3 xxoo a lovely work
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Date: 6/7/2025 1:04:00 AM
Lovely poem. Here it's supposed to be spring. Feels more like summer. Already with a fan on. Soon it will be the air conditioner.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:43:00 AM
I am sure we will be there soon, but for now it has been pretty pleasant. God bless you, dear poet!
Date: 6/6/2025 4:13:00 PM
it all sounds wonderful...aha reds, sky blues, a rush of oaks and maples...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2025 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, David!
Date: 6/6/2025 1:52:00 PM
- When the weather is nice ... in June everything is wonderful ... we have 12 degrees and rain today ... far from summer weather - An encouraging poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2025 6:25:00 PM
Sending you a few rays xx
Date: 6/6/2025 9:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Of Fair Weather" write. Hot days are here for me. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away.........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2025 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!

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