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October.16. 2023

A Hi- Poo Senryu Poetry Contest

Sponsor. John Lawless

constipated bad finally when poo came out~ it was so smelly.

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Date: 10/31/2023 7:40:00 PM

haha. picture goes well with it. Congrats

Date: 10/30/2023 4:30:00 PM

Graphic write dear Valsa. LOL Congratulations on your win! :))

Date: 10/30/2023 10:52:00 AM

lol I can relate lol:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 10/18/2023 8:47:00 PM

Oh, Valsa. Really! Wherever did you find MY picture?! lol. (He who smelt it, dealt it!) ~ Amusing musings, gw

Valsa George
Date: 10/19/2023 3:33:00 AM

:) :)))))))))))

Date: 10/16/2023 4:29:00 PM

A real stinker! Lol

Date: 10/16/2023 10:07:00 AM

Good Luck with your write. Have a great day........................

Date: 10/16/2023 9:51:00 AM

Occasionally I have constipation. Luckily never leaves any smell. Blessings

Date: 10/16/2023 7:45:00 AM

Hi Valsa, I can relate to these lines. What a relief when one is finally able to go. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day-Alexis