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Odor-Cide

three fluff balls sweetly yellow and small packs a smell Like a hog farm!

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/5/2012 9:20:00 PM

I laughed on the last line,,,,,,, cute ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 3:47:00 AM

aweee.. Doris...

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/19/2012 3:23:00 PM

What could they be?? hmm.. I'd make my guess but I'm feeling chicken.." pleased to read your piece today Doris..!

Judy Ball

Date: 6/18/2012 5:30:00 PM

Hmmmm What is it that stinks? Guess anything can smell after awhile. Very thought provoking. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/16/2012 2:45:00 PM

Ah Doris, so clever the way you make the art of smelling into poetry. I guess we can get used toanything if we have to. Are the fluff balls chicks?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2012 8:46:00 AM

Geese poop is unpleasant?....Oh! someone said that if turned out free they deposit it all over the place ...Mom

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/7/2012 5:00:00 PM

Them little stinkers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2012 10:06:00 PM

Funny one, Doris. Sometimes BIG things come in those small packages. big and scary.

Dan Kearley

Date: 6/4/2012 1:41:00 AM

Ya brought me a :o) as always...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/31/2012 3:13:00 AM

Doris were are you.....? Like your Odor-cide haiku poem, well done. - Sending you a :) and love from Anne-Lise

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/25/2012 10:22:00 AM

Yowser Doris. I think I can smell from it here. What are the fluff balls?

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/18/2012 3:11:00 PM

love this Doris, and i'm intigued about the title. harry

Dave Timperley

Date: 5/17/2012 3:41:00 PM

I never did hear of a sweet hog farm! There is one here just along the A6 and boy is that a high aroma! God Bless. Dave

Dave Timperley

Date: 5/17/2012 3:40:00 PM

I never did hear of a sweet hog farm! There is one here just along the A6 and boy is that a high aroma! God Bless. Dave

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/15/2012 1:48:00 PM

i felt those words soothe the heart. Great write. Ronny

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/15/2012 1:48:00 PM

i felt those words soothe the heart. Great write. Ronny