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Odor-Cide

three fluff balls sweetly
yellow and small packs a smell
Like a hog farm!

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Debbie Duncan

August 5, 2012 at 9:20 PM

I laughed on the last line,,,,,,, cute ;}

Poet Destroyer A

July 16, 2012 at 3:47 AM

aweee.. Doris...

Joe Maverick

June 19, 2012 at 3:23 PM

What could they be?? hmm.. I'd make my guess but I'm feeling chicken.." pleased to read your piece today Doris..!

Judy Ball

June 18, 2012 at 5:30 PM

Hmmmm What is it that stinks? Guess anything can smell after awhile. Very thought provoking. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley

June 16, 2012 at 2:45 PM

Ah Doris, so clever the way you make the art of smelling into poetry. I guess we can get used toanything if we have to. Are the fluff balls chicks?

Sara Kendrick

June 9, 2012 at 8:46 AM

Geese poop is unpleasant?....Oh! someone said that if turned out free they deposit it all over the place ...Mom

Robert Johnson

June 7, 2012 at 5:00 PM

Them little stinkers.

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2012 at 10:06 PM

Funny one, Doris. Sometimes BIG things come in those small packages. big and scary.

Dan Kearley

June 4, 2012 at 1:41 AM

Ya brought me a :o) as always...

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 31, 2012 at 3:13 AM

Doris were are you.....? Like your Odor-cide haiku poem, well done. - Sending you a :) and love from Anne-Lise

Kathryn Collins

May 25, 2012 at 10:22 AM

Yowser Doris. I think I can smell from it here. What are the fluff balls?

Harry Horsman

May 18, 2012 at 3:11 PM

love this Doris, and i'm intigued about the title. harry

Dave Timperley

May 17, 2012 at 3:41 PM

I never did hear of a sweet hog farm! There is one here just along the A6 and boy is that a high aroma! God Bless. Dave

Dave Timperley

May 17, 2012 at 3:40 PM

I never did hear of a sweet hog farm! There is one here just along the A6 and boy is that a high aroma! God Bless. Dave

Ronny Madonsela

May 15, 2012 at 1:48 PM

i felt those words soothe the heart. Great write. Ronny

Ronny Madonsela

May 15, 2012 at 1:48 PM

i felt those words soothe the heart. Great write. Ronny

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