Ode to the Mirror

she used to shrink
inside her own skin
wore doubt like a coat
stitched too thin
but broken glass
still reflects the light
and jagged edges
sharpen the fight

now she stands
where my fears once laid
building worth
from the cracks they made
she is gold in the dirt
still gleaming unseen
an unfinished masterpiece
bold and serene
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Alex Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 7:00 PM
"now she stands where my fears once laid" - A very grand writing. Congratulations!
Liversidge Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 2:27 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading!
Woods Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 11:33 AM
This poem hit hard and powerfully...I loved the way I had to hunt for the 3 qualities you've written about. Such a brief poem but full of wisdom and admiration. The assignment was to write an Ode to one's self but not knowing the author I could not judge from that point of view. So I judged the quality of the poem itself and very much enjoyed yours! Ty for entering! Xo
Liversidge Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 2:27 AM
Thanks so much Crystol!!
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