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Ode To Pepsi

My addiction to Pepsi is a curse It's bad for my body and for my purse Limit is one per day But I have feet of clay I love the stuff..for better or for worse
for the Beverage contest...glug Barbara Gorelick 10/27/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/8/2011 7:47:00 PM
You will be happy to learn that your addiction helps feed the mouths of my beloved best friend and his wonderful family of 4! He is a manager for Pepsi in N.C. and is a VERY uniquely loving man with a beautiful wife and two small children! Thank you, now drink up! This guy has helped me through so much! Your poem ROCKS! I will send it to him with your permission. He is not on the Soup BUT I assure you, this poem will be safe, and much appreciated in his hands!
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:28:00 PM
Yep, some of us coke and pepsi lovers got on the list. Coolio!! And congratulations.
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Date: 11/2/2011 3:22:00 PM
all the best for the contest Barbara,, i like pepsi too..! but not that much..!
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Date: 11/2/2011 9:22:00 AM
Don't you love how those bubbles pop out your nose. Great feeling and fun in your verse!
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:20:00 PM
Never joined the Pepsi generation, but then my genetic roots are deep south where we call every soft drink Coke! Sweet write, Barbara, congrats!~N
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Pick A Beverage, Any Beverage" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2011 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Barbara. Hope you get over your addiction to pepsi. Great write. Titus
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Date: 10/31/2011 4:35:00 PM
Am I hearing wedding bells for you and Pepsi, dear LNC? This is a riot!! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/31/2011 2:52:00 PM
Okay Barbara as long as you're not drinking diet. I consider that poison. Congratulations on your win. Lov, Joyce
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Date: 10/31/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Favorite Beverage Contest Barbara
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:13:00 PM
congrats on your 5th place win in the contest Barbara ( even if I'm a Coke lover), great entry
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Date: 10/30/2011 4:11:00 PM
YEp, all those colas are so nice!! I see you limit yourself too. I hope it does us good to be so disciplined about it!!
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Date: 10/29/2011 9:42:00 AM
sweet tea is my nemesis.....love it and it hurts me in return. story of my life. hehe
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Date: 10/28/2011 11:18:00 AM
Love that Pepsi Barb ! Great entry dear poet ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james
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Date: 10/28/2011 10:28:00 AM
haha, You are of the Pepsi clan, and I? I am of the Mountain Dew clan. Perhaps we should unite. I think that mixture is called a "suicide" haha. You made me laugh with this poem. very good.
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Date: 10/28/2011 8:28:00 AM
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Date: 10/28/2011 8:15:00 AM
barbara, we are jerks, lol... mine is coke zero by the liters a day!!.. am i in a rut??.. zety write with winning flavor! :) hugggs
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