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Ode To Lily

On our disparitive continuum when after dusk the dawn is flowering and skies aglow in rose chrysanthemum have scattered banished darkness, cowering; And when the silver drizzled fingerlings traipse slippy streaks upon our timid hold of dimpled melodies the robin sings beneath an ever blinking marigold; In oscillation then returns a choice between relinquished self or dim retorts where fools admonish rain and wise rejoice reflective puddles pooled on tennis courts; Since by the day is night from whence the day, and by the morning clouds a midday rain - in either or exists enough to say that by the by for none should one complain; For when tomorrow reigns and shadows clear, while through replenished streams fresh water flows, what babbles life in dawn ‘til stars appear is that by which my daughter Lily grows; And though at times unsmooth, my pendulum will always sway by her empowering; the brightest light on my continuum whose love brought back a father, cowering. 4/7/2017

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Date: 4/7/2017 5:22:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your daughter Phillip! Enjoyed!~Che :)
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Date: 4/7/2017 5:07:00 PM
The words are magical and beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. The imagery and shear beauty of your words are impressively seasoned by a extensive vocabulary and fill the page with their magic pallet of colors. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/7/2017 7:14:00 AM
- Beautifully written for your daughter, Phillip .... words that touches my heart of mother's love - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2017 6:40:00 AM
Aww Phillip a fabulous tribute to your lovely Lily - sure brought a huge lump to my throat reading your lovely lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2017 4:38:00 AM
A lovely tribute to the love you have for your daughter....the brightest light! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/7/2017 3:07:00 AM
This is such a beautiful, loving poem for your daughter. Something to cherish and so warm. I especially love the last two stanzas, and this part in particular: "my pendulum // will always sway by her empowering; // the brightest light on my continuum // whose love brought back a father, cowering"
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 4/7/2017 3:34:00 AM
Somewhat fictional, of course, as I'm far too tough to have ever cowered, but I thought it'd be a nice touch. Thank you, D-Dub

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