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Written for the ode contest sponsored by Regina Mcintosh

Her untamable sakura spirit glows like scents of petrichor, perfumed in jasmine water, whilst there’s no path to golden rays of sunlight, she shines for the elite vines trailing through silver gates of heaven. And when the sky is a sea of lilac lanterns, and mauve mists, shifting amidst raining rhinestones etched with mood-swings, she remembers~ God as the choreographer the soothing master, tranquilizing trees tangled with roots of torment. But chocolate cosmos remain blindfolded by pearly lilies, as the salmon-hued bird of paradise blossoms from neglected lines of caramelized skin, she still sprouts in solitude, delicate but powerfully growing from sepia roots of grief and regrets, lessons learned through wisdom earned from truth, and hymns of almighty that echo in captivating cadence~ as spiritual songs of sepals flourish amidst withering petals, there her frost-bitten soul found a healing field in a poetic reverie, where lyrical verses float above mulberry meadows, sowing hyacinth herbs of kindness~ painting petunias in patience, silently sprinkling enticing anemones as an inevitable sign of eternal hope to freedom. A poetic earth that shall remain untouched amidst the cruel wind that blow it’s way through, while lakes of longing emanate soulful sagas, synchronized from strings of moon-kissed stars, unfurling light when darkness dwell upon dreary hearts. Mother-nature, compassionate spirit, I hear her plea for empathetic emeralds, engrossed with righteous rubies, from topaz tenderness. Here, in singing silence, I stretch my heart to seraphic spheres, for she lies in solitary stillness. Let the beating hearts of walking silhouettes manifest silken fate for her divine aura. Rivers may no longer flow, and flowers may no longer be fragrant, but faith shall never be perished, and the wildest forests of her heart shall forever flare evergreen dreams of tomorrow.

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Date: 4/28/2024 2:08:00 PM
Wonderful writing as usual. You are always an inspiration. God bless you sweet lady,, much love and congrats, Gina
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Date: 4/25/2024 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Ink Empress! What sensual imagery, you’ve expressed, from the first to last verses! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/25/2024 6:39:00 AM
Big congratulations, dear Ink. It's so nice to see you made the list!
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Date: 4/9/2024 10:31:00 AM
This is such a lovely ode. And it's plain to see how much you love alliteration. I really loved the stanza bginning like this: A poetic earth that shall remain untouched amidst the cruel wind that blow it’s way through, while lakes of longing emanate soulful sagas, etc. Super, Ink!
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:30:00 AM
Awwn sweet andrea that makes me so happy to see you think that my ode is good enough i appreciate you always beautiful soul! Beautiful in and out
Date: 4/9/2024 5:12:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, This peerless poetry piece blooms and blossoms with consummate style and sophistication. You embroider each line with stunning vistas, and stellar emotional peaks. Best of luck with this. I am so grateful for your intelligent insights on Within Your Keep. Howard
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:30:00 AM
Awwn thank you dear Howard im so grateful for your kindness and generous support so very much truly! Thank you again and again
Date: 4/9/2024 4:38:00 AM
"trees tangled with roots of torment. " Love the depth of this image and its alliterative beauty! How lovely it is to visualize the sky 'as a sea of lilac lanterns' ! God is the great choreographer arranging dance movements among stars and stellar constellations. Even amid adversities, Nature thrives and confirms the truth that redemption is possible. The smell of petrichor and jasmine enhances the sensual effect. . Despite dismal surroundings, hope flourishes and dreams thrive. As ever, this is an amazing Ode on Nature
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:29:00 AM
Dear sweet valsa iv missed reading you i hope everything is going well for you and i appreciate you visiting my profile! Sending you light always and your sincerity i feel from your thoughtful comments
Date: 4/8/2024 7:36:00 PM
Love the alliteration. Jasmine water~ I love Jasmine. It was a great read as always. A pleasure reading your lovely metaphors. "Caramelized skin." Sometimes I really do picture these metaphors and it's crazy. "Let the beating hearts of walking silhouettes." My imagination has gone wide with this and I hope it survives. I love the idea of hope, even if the clouds turn pink, to live is to hope. And tomorrow brings joy. Great work dearest Ink.
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:28:00 AM
Beautiful poetess i appreciate your kindness and your warmth i do feel and appreciate from miles! You truly are such a generous soul! Thank you so very much truly
Date: 4/8/2024 5:46:00 PM
God is the choreographer is a good way to put it in human terms. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:27:00 AM
Thank you dear sara k I appreciate you always
Date: 4/8/2024 5:40:00 PM
Whoah, such a poem!!! You certainly did well with giving Earth her personification...it's wise!! A real joy to read this-
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:27:00 AM
Awwn paige always is a pleasure to hear from you sweet one
Date: 4/8/2024 5:37:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem with its outstanding and captivating imagery. Your alliterative phrases were beautiful in and of themselves (singing silence, I stretch my heart to seraphic spheres, for she lies in solitary stillness.) I identified with the feeling of resilience in your Ode. (but faith shall never be perished,) Best wishes with the contest, dearest Ink. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:26:00 AM
Awwn thank you for the well wishes and your sweet comments on all my poems beautiful sara you are such a kind soul
Date: 4/8/2024 2:40:00 PM
Dear Ink, This poem is truly exceptional, with its powerful language and vibrant imagery. The way each verse captures the resilience and grace of humanity, embodied by the unwavering sakura spirit, is truly remarkable. The eloquence of your words evokes a sense of beauty and resilience, as you paint a vivid picture of a soul that triumphs over adversity. Your use of vivid metaphors depicting the resilience of nature and the growth of the human spirit has created a narrative that exudes hope and rejuvenation. My dear friend, your tribute is truly profound and impactful.
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:26:00 AM
Ah dr sotto your comments are always so thoughtful and so very kind! Im so grateful for your generosity! Thank you so very much
Date: 4/8/2024 11:38:00 AM
when the sky is a sea of lilac lanterns,and mauve mists, love the imagery on this!! lessons learned through wisdom earned from truth, m her frost bitten soul found a healing field in a poetic reverie, where lyrical verses float above mulberry meadows, I love it when you bring such gravitating depths papi.. I love how you u have merged the elements n the stones into one brings out a very elegantly strong structure of the piece. Rivers may no longer flow, n flowers may no longer be fragrant, gorgeous
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:25:00 AM
Papi u took time to read this excellent ! Im grateful hahah
Date: 4/8/2024 9:05:00 AM
A beautiful poem. It is apropos for April, and for Earth Day. May rivers always flow and forests always grow. Let's keep our fingers crossed.
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:25:00 AM
Dear hilda it is yes the month of earth day, how true. I am so very grateful for your support always you ate such a kind soul
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:25:00 AM
Are not ate sorry for the typo
Date: 4/8/2024 8:05:00 AM
"hymns of almighty that echo in captivating cadence~ as spiritual songs of sepals flourish amidst withering petals," Wonderful imagery! Great poetry. "where lyrical verses float above mulberry meadows, sowing hyacinth herbs of kindness~" Love it! "faith shall never be perished, and the wildest forests of her heart shall forever flare evergreen dreams of tomorrow. " Wow~ perfect dynamic ending...beginning really. Enjoyed your poem very much.
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:24:00 AM
What a beautiful and kind comment thank you dear joe for being so thoughtful and for leaving such a deep analysis of it! Always a delight to hear from you
Date: 4/8/2024 7:37:00 AM
Wow, my dear Ink Empress, I've missed reading this magnificence of poetry that oozes in your artistic veins! What a breathtaking and extraordinary poem you've painted whilst personifying our mother earth's soul and singing the most beautiful ode in her glory. I absolutely love the enchanting descriptions that you've woven within impeccable imagery and heartfelt emotions, so richly spoken. "God as the choreographer the soothing master, tranquilizing trees tangled with roots of torment" Indeed, so soulful and elegant. "I hear her plea to for empathetic emeralds, engrossed with righteous rubies, from topaz tenderness" Ahh, love the use of gemstones, truly fascinating and creative.. And that ending stanza speaks immense volumes, absolutely a FAV piece for me, sending you so much love and light, always. Keep shining and writing :)
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:24:00 AM
Such a thoughtful and beautiful comment that made me happy! So happy to receive your fave and to see your name in my comments also my dear hiya sharma. Thank you so very much truly
Date: 4/8/2024 6:15:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, What a truly majestic poem filled with emotions and wonderful imagery. I loved how each stanza is a testament to the resilience and beauty of the human spirit, personified by the untamable sakura spirit. Your words evoke the scents of petrichor and jasmine, creating a picture of a soul that shines amidst adversity. With your amazing metaphors of nature's resilience and spiritual growth, you created a narrative of hope and redemption. This is an outstanding piece of poetry, a true masterpiece in every sense. a FAV. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:23:00 AM
What a profound comment this is dear daniel and im so happy to receive your fav too! Thank you so very much for alwsys feeling the depth of my poems truly i am grateful to have readers that support wholeheartedly like you
Date: 4/8/2024 5:49:00 AM
A powerful, meaningful tribute you wrote, my friend. I found the essence of your theme in these lines: Mother-nature, compassionate spirit, I hear her plea to for empathetic emeralds, engrossed with righteous rubies, from topaz tenderness---and it resonates throughout. Ink.
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:22:00 AM
Thank you dear vijay for your unwavering support and for being so kind always your support means alot to me
Date: 4/8/2024 5:34:00 AM
An amazing ode to our planet.. As always your poem is rich in vivid imagery and powerful symbolism. The "untameable sakura spirit" evokes the image of cherry blossoms, traditionally associated with beauty and impermanence, yet here portrayed as resilient and enduring. The use of colours like lilac, mauve, and salmon conjures ethereal landscapes, while flowers like chocolate cosmos and bird of paradise symbolize beauty and transformation. I think this one will do well.. Best of luck..
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear silent one! Your comments always mean so much to me! I am truly grateful always for your support and your poetic presence
Date: 4/8/2024 5:33:00 AM
I can't think of a more apt or beautiful tribute to our awesome planet and the Creator of it all. You touched on so many aspects of its splendor. Your last stanza reads like a Psalm. Well done Inky
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:20:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much tomsxy. Iv never read psalms, but i think quran translations sound very poetic too. What a beautiful and thoughtful comment im truly grateful for this comment! Thank you so very much.
Date: 4/8/2024 4:55:00 AM
Faith shall never be perished … love it
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Date: 4/12/2024 11:20:00 AM
Awwn love u

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