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Sunset

The dusk of day has beauty like the dawn as July flies ignite the sapphire air. Blue twilight stands near waiting to come on and ease the timid mind burdened with care. Fine panorama of pure indigo so slowly creeps to dim the western views. The sun is setting in blue golden glow in evenings when the colors mix their hues. With dusk the restful simmers soothe the soul at the close of a hectic humid haste. The body feels the cobalt night unfold as stars shine on our lives to have their way. In colors golden, shining brief beyond, the dusk of day has beauty like the dawn. 7/17/18 Nature Scene-Orphan Sonnet 4th place Sponsored by: Dale Gregory Cozart

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Date: 6/10/2019 6:33:00 AM
Love the colorful write! Congrats, Janis!
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Date: 6/9/2019 4:11:00 PM
Your have painted an absolutely gorgeous Sonnet here, Janis! I really loved your vivid descriptions, especially how creatively you describe the different color schemes! Lovely! Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 6/9/2019 12:40:00 PM
I love the way you elude to fire flies in this enchanting piece Janis. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/9/2019 11:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Janis. Well done.
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Date: 6/9/2019 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your 4th Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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