Ode To Billy

Young Billy was a soldier in the War Between the States; 
And scars of war made Billy feel a victim of the fates. 
He fought for Mr. Lincoln and the preservation creed 
Yet saw too many dying and he saw too many bleed. 

Now Billy knew the dreams of war so vivid every night, 
Were dreams of almost everyone who'd caught that bloody fight. 
The war he fought sought righteousness which he believed was true 
But never understood how North and South could split in two. 

His parents died of fever while he fought in Tennessee, 
A fact he didn't know until the North claimed victory. 
His papa, wise and sullen like the Irish Sea he knew, 
Had come to this America with dreams to start anew. 

Young Billy hoped his mama knew he'd made it through the war 
For she had shed no salted tears when he marched off before - 
But mothers bury very deep such pain within their soul 
So only God could touch her there and try to make her whole. 

Now both were gone along with wisdoms they could gently share 
To help him lift conflicted pain no man should have to bear. 
He prayed that Father Dave back home in Dublin had been right - 
A man can speak with loved ones in the starlight of the night. 

The things of life one covets can be lost to history, 
Including soldiers buried by the war's ferocity. 
He cried out loud in anger at the God he once adored: 
"Why did You leave me all alone my precious, precious Lord? 

What grave offense did I commence before Your loving eyes?" 
Though God was silent in repose great clouds then cleared the skies 
And Billy's father softly spoke and made the two as one 
With words of wisdom's calming balm to heal his broken son. 

"The wisdom of this world are pearls wrapped snug in crystal rain 
Proclaiming life will never end but just begin again."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 15, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Hi Tom.This is really great poetry.Easy to read and very rhymic.I feel it would be great spoken with music playing in the background like certain recording artists have done.I loved it very much it has such wonderful lines in particular the final two.I am so glad it made the feature page,I might have missed your worthwhile talent.Congratulations. Love June(sylvia)
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May 15, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Thank you so much SYLVIA. I am honored good poet. tom
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May 13, 2011 at 6:14 PM
Tom.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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May 15, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Poet and I am honored. tom
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May 9, 2011 at 10:20 PM
Hi Tom!...What a beautiful piece of work here!..I absolutely love rhyming poetry especially when it flows so smoothly together such as this one.and all the while telling such a beautiful story!....THIS IS BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN!.....Awesome Job Man!..........SugarbearUSA.......:)
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May 15, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Wow, Dixie, thank you very much. I am most honored Dixie. Thank you. tom
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May 9, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Congrats on your featured poem..Im glad that I got a chance to read it..well done. BG
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May 15, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Barbara. Glad you enjoyed. tom
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May 9, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Tom. Love, Carol
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May 15, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Carol. Most honored. tom
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, tom
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May 15, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Thank you Dr. I am most honored. tom
Mitchell Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Excellent poem!
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May 15, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Virginia. Glad you enjoyed. tom
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
Mcmurray Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Will do Diamond Rich, with pleasure. Thanks for the read. tom
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