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Ode To Baboon Face

Can't recall a time before you that I'd ever laughed so loud I hear the music clearer now When all I heard was sound You taught me how to drink and toke Like real teenagers do And brought me cups of chicken soup When I had colds and flu It hasn't always been this way though Not always platonic For the first day we ever met the hate I felt was chronic Your belly laugh, your squeeky voice Your gappy goofy teeth The way your pants fall off your ass Whoever would believe That one day I would laugh like you, at you At everything Who knew behind your baboon face that You could bloody sing Your pudgy hands would grasp the neck Of your beloved guitar The only thing you played that day happened To be my heart From hate to love, then afterall it's back To being friends I'll be forever grateful that you drive me Round the bend! I wouldn't change one piece or part or thing That makes you,you So thanks for all the feral times For the hullabaloo 20th July 2011

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Date: 9/21/2011 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of Nancy Jones "A Toothful Ode" Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Jodie
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:02:00 AM
Jodie congrats on your win, sounds like it was great fun..David
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Toothful Ode contest sponsored by Nancy Jones. CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:50:00 PM
This is a great poem. Congratulations on your recognition. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:21:00 PM
CONGRATS JODIE ON YOUR HM IN ODE CONTEST WITH THIS CLEVERLY CRAFTED PIECE LUV..
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:07:00 PM
omg, omg, omg... love this poem soooooooo much... just couldn't quite get it to jive close enough to the idea of ode in my head to place it higher... if it'd been stanza'd then definitely. Thanks so much for this one, Jodie, and for supporting my contest. Happy day, Namaste~N
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Date: 7/29/2011 11:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jodie. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 7/27/2011 9:09:00 AM
What an upbeat and delightful friend to have, Jodie! Made me smile. Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/26/2011 12:26:00 PM
This was such a fun read, your title is so fun-- and quite endearing too! Love the jovial tone you used here, and what a wonderful journey,Jodie-- that friendship you have sure sounds precious :D
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Date: 7/26/2011 7:45:00 AM
breathless am i, jodie...happy thumbs up to you on your stunning win! :) huggs
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Date: 7/26/2011 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Michael's "Ode to a Friend" contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:42:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on another spectacular win for a special poem in ode to a friend..luv.. very moving in sweet way luv..enjoy..
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:15:00 PM
thank you for participating in my first contest, congrats on your win, and I really loved how this friendship of yours developed~Michael
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:36:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael,Jodie
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