Ode To a River

River flowing down round rocks, 
              boulders and fallen trees.
Born at the mountain top,
                  after the winter freeze

Snow and ice melting feeding,
                          the little river’s thirst.
Clear pure crystal waters flowing 
               downward after being nursed.

Many obstacles in its path as if 
                  attempting to slow its progress.
But the little river now is stronger,
                 and full of hope and faithfulness.

Downward, downward
                     its mother waiting patiently.
Struggling and fighting to be
           free, as the water rises sagaciously.

Overcoming obstacles the
                            little river grows in size.
As long as there is hope, there’s 
                            no need to compromise.

Breaking down the barriers 
                             for it will not surrender.
Downward, downward flowing for
                       it is now a fierce contender.

Other obstacles up ahead,
                            tell it to stop and rest. 
But the river rushes forward for 
                   no one can impede its quest.
 
It did not heed the words and 
                             pounding dirt and mud away,
the river fought and wrestle, 
                                with all the filth and decay.

Downward, downward it went,
                       for now it felt its mother near.
It now sees a glimpse of her, 
                           and knows it had persevere.

At last the river saw its mother’s 
                           face and open smile.
The sea’s arms opened and the waves rejoiced,
                           to see and feel its juvenile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Such a powerful and beautifully told story of making it home. I absolutely LOVE this poem. Intelligently are articulately delivered through the magic of imagery and your fabulous imagination. This is one of the best poems I have read here. Thank you for sharing Carlos. I have added it to my favourites.
Cook Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Love this poem, well done. :)
Blanca Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Hello Tom. Thanks for you're encouraging comment.
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