Odd Man Out

The pair should be headed for fame
Behind, in the draw’r, out of aim.
     He was the one left,
     Not right; he’s bereft.
The sock was not chosen for game.

The sock was not chosen, and why?
Embarrassing gaff, he could die.
     Uncool was his sole.
     Unsewn, had a hole.
His match did not stop to say bye.

The right, he returned, with his win.
New left was alright with his skin.
     Ignored was old sock.
     Tossed out like a rock.
He’s bitter and holey as sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Freie Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Hi Kim, I really love this one. Aren't limericks fun to write? Keep up the good work baby sister.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 5:22 AM
For sure! If they’re not fun, the form may be the same but it is not a limerick. Thank you, Randy! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Thanks for the laugh... Enjoy your day writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 5:22 AM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:03 AM
- Congratulations on your fun win in the contest, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:34 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs ~ Kim
Baker Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 4:21 PM
Fun and sad Limerick, my friend. It took a few verses to tell, "the rest of the story". Great poetry, a FAV for my list! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:36 PM
Thank you for making this a fave, Bill! :)
Fowler Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 8:41 AM
I laughed at this cute string Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Crandall Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:18 PM
That's funny Kim. I like the limericks, one after the other.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, David! :)
Hind Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Wow, Kim- such originality and raw talent in just a simple prompt; good luck with the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!
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