Odd Man Out

The pair should be headed for fame
Behind, in the draw’r, out of aim.
     He was the one left,
     Not right; he’s bereft.
The sock was not chosen for game.

The sock was not chosen, and why?
Embarrassing gaff, he could die.
     Uncool was his sole.
     Unsewn, had a hole.
His match did not stop to say bye.

The right, he returned, with his win.
New left was alright with his skin.
     Ignored was old sock.
     Tossed out like a rock.
He’s bitter and holey as sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 4/21/2024 12:15:00 PM
Hi Kim, I really love this one. Aren't limericks fun to write? Keep up the good work baby sister.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2024 5:22:00 AM
For sure! If they’re not fun, the form may be the same but it is not a limerick. Thank you, Randy! :)
Date: 4/17/2024 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Thanks for the laugh... Enjoy your day writing away............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2024 5:22:00 AM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Date: 4/17/2024 3:03:00 AM
- Congratulations on your fun win in the contest, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2024 4:34:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 4/15/2024 4:21:00 PM
Fun and sad Limerick, my friend. It took a few verses to tell, "the rest of the story". Great poetry, a FAV for my list! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2024 7:36:00 PM
Thank you for making this a fave, Bill! :)
Date: 4/11/2024 8:41:00 AM
I laughed at this cute string Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2024 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Date: 4/9/2024 6:18:00 PM
That's funny Kim. I like the limericks, one after the other.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2024 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, David! :)
Date: 4/9/2024 5:21:00 PM
Wow, Kim- such originality and raw talent in just a simple prompt; good luck with the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2024 6:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!
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