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By mid-October, I can always tell it’s that sweet time when colors are so bright that if they had aroma, they would smell like candy corn or cinnamon and quite like a persimmon I would like to bite because the leaves on trees so yummy seem against blue sky, and in the day’s last gleam. The many hues are anything but bland. I drive along in wonder at God’s scheme: Octobers here appear like Candy Land. Oct. 26, 2022 For 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1219' Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/9/2022 7:39:00 PM
Yes, October is like candy land ! Beautiful Andrea. Congratulations on your first place win !
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:26:00 AM
Gorgeous one Andrea: i felt this woul be a winner
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, a wonderful poem indeed.
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:19:00 AM
Great and beautiful writing on October wonders. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2022 2:23:00 AM
God's scheme is sure baffling, Andrea, congratulations:)
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Date: 11/5/2022 9:05:00 PM
I love October but I might madly in love with it when I'm in your place. Stunningly beautiful dizain my dear friend Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved first win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 11/5/2022 2:27:00 PM
Back with congratulations on this being on Sotto's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/5/2022 10:23:00 AM
A different idea that works so well! Yumm....candy corn! Loved reading your poem, and congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/5/2022 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on winning the contest, Andrea. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Date: 10/28/2022 2:59:00 PM
Your imagery is so well interwoven, I can picture, taste and smell your October. Well done.
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Date: 10/27/2022 10:31:00 AM
Yes, I agree. The color of the trees and the nice weather(mostly) are to be enjoyed. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us that reads like a good contender to me and for stopping by my page. . Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2022 7:16:00 PM
You know you got me with an Autumn poem. Love this form and you have done it wonderfully. I tried it and will again. Love you, SuZ
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Date: 10/26/2022 6:22:00 PM
So beautiful is the Fall! My favorite time of year!
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Date: 10/26/2022 1:14:00 PM
You are right. I am a very avid summer lover, so it took till a few years ago to enjoy the fall colors. I love how you point out that they are a God scheme!
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:02:00 AM
Great descriptive write. Good luck in the contest. blessings my friend
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Date: 10/26/2022 8:25:00 AM
So well-written, this descriptive poem which follows the strict pattern of October.
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Date: 10/26/2022 8:05:00 AM
Incredible how the scenery changes from one place to another. Here in Malta this year it rained only once and it is still warm.
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