Barbara Gorelick Poet Acrostic

October's Gifts

Of all the months, the days of October
Call to me with a voice  like no other
The harvest almost done, silos filling
Over night the color palate changes
Birds have gathered for their flight 
Enchantment of the year's first fireside
Renewing rest of winter soon to come

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Joyce Johnson September 8, 2011 at 11:13 PM Great write in praise of October. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage September 7, 2011 at 11:27 PM Hi Barbara, I really like the flow of your poem. Yes the silos are filling, its sort of reassuring isn't it. Its a nice take on fall. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta September 7, 2011 at 9:50 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,Barbara

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2011 at 8:03 PM Creative winning work..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot September 7, 2011 at 5:13 PM congrats on your 1st place win in the contest, lovely portrayal of the month of october...

Jack Horne September 7, 2011 at 4:41 PM That fireside sounds so welcoming! Many congrats to you, Barbara : )

Cyndi Macmillan September 7, 2011 at 4:38 PM I liked the flow of this one, Barbara. And I especially was charmed by the second line. Some things do 'speak' to us, don't they? I get some kind of kick out of apple trees, September nights and even the fall rain feels cleansing. Cheers and big congrats, Cyndi

Carolyn Devonshire September 7, 2011 at 1:05 PM Oh yes, dear LNC. October is my favorite month as well. What a lovely acrostic! Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn

David Williams September 7, 2011 at 12:59 PM hey Barbara congrats on your win,David

John Freeman September 7, 2011 at 11:23 AM Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE" Barbara. A great pleasure to see your poem in first place. Agape, Moses

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 10:59 AM Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 7, 2011 at 10:54 AM Congrats BG on first place win with this cool write on Fall ...

Carol Sunshine Brown September 7, 2011 at 10:31 AM Congratulations on your placement in my contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire September 3, 2011 at 7:41 PM My LOVE, Congratulations, I'm sure YOU will be in the top of Carol's Winners Circle Excellent Images "Over night the color Palate changes"A Superb LINE With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOURS...HG(Harry )

Virginia Mitchell September 3, 2011 at 11:00 AM Good luck in the contest! Its beautifull, except for. "...rest of winter soon to come" ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 3, 2011 at 8:48 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Jun-Jun Villanueva September 2, 2011 at 10:41 PM good luck for the contest my friend~~~smile~~~*-*jun-jun