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October Tease - Etheree

October Tease - Etheree Spent, Summer sets the stage withdraws on cue beneath cloudless blue. October lays her quilt upon chilled and browning fields leaves - a touch of artist’s brush cool breath upon the neck of Winter soft dalliance as rainbow curtain falls. 9/21/2015 submitted to – For Love of October – poetry contest

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Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 10:24:00 PM

John, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT

James Inman

Date: 10/1/2015 12:19:00 PM

Sweet words but melancholic, nice write, John.

John Lawless
Date: 10/1/2015 9:07:00 PM

James, appreciate you stopping by to comment, thanks.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/1/2015 4:12:00 AM

Congrats on ur great win John with this awesome write!

John Lawless
Date: 10/1/2015 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Sharma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 2:07:00 AM

John, it's so strange. When I google just the word "artist's" it comes up as two syllables but then when I google the whole line that word appears in, they count it as three syllables. I just got hung up on that! anyway, I liked the little things you did in this one, such as rhyming blue with cue and using such great personification at the end of this poem. Last two lines stunning. Congrats in my contest.

John Lawless
Date: 10/1/2015 9:06:00 PM

Andrea...I tried three different syllable counters and got a similar result...so I decided to leave it in your hands. Thanks for the placement and for torturing the muse with an Etheree