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October Suns

October Suns

October suns are a fire
that set the orange leaves
aglow
sprinkling embers in Maple leaves
to make them blood red.
October Saturdays always have sunshine.
There are colors-plenty,
yellow, green, black
opal and tourmaline
with blue atomic skies

10/3/19

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Date: 10/24/2019 11:21:00 AM
Congrats, Janis!
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Date: 10/21/2019 7:47:00 PM
this is FANTASTIC, Janis. Congrats for your worthy win.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/22/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 10/21/2019 3:22:00 PM
Love your last line, ends with a punch. Congrats on your top win, Janis.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/22/2019 5:48:00 PM
A very unfortunate situation. Thanks.
Date: 10/21/2019 11:51:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Janis. Lovely piece. Janice
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/22/2019 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Janice. Always good to hear from you,.
Date: 10/21/2019 9:23:00 AM
Janis beautifully written! Congrats on your win!;)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/22/2019 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Brenda.
Date: 10/3/2019 4:45:00 PM
Beautiful Janis! Well done :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/22/2019 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Heidi.

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