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October Realm

What awaits those that walk the ebony realm of autumn trees the mystic embodiment of an enchanted forest the lullabies of ancient leaves as they sway in unison with the crisp winds. Jaded aura amidst the setting with in this realm a pale shroud worn by those human relics that walk this labyrinth of mysteries, a spiritual calm endlessly caresses the mood the soft waters of a thousand lakes line the luminous landscape what precious orchards with in this maze to mesmerize the devined soul. Art thou immortal in these meadows of secret what eludes the outside world of this place,are porcelain petals to beautiful to share does the magenta sky hold it's secrets as not to entwine the untouched with the touched. Dare not this threshold spill its supernatural the beholder of such a palour will never allow such tainted idea's,this celestial realm of silhouettes has danced along side decades past as if a jewel wields such power in the face of a decaying world. As kingdoms rise and fall as the grotesque of man has come and gone the everlasting of this October Realm remains, its not yesterday that's remembered in this horizon but the doctrine of banishment to the ungodly. Seeded here must be heaven on earth is it not imminent that such a place exist with my eyes adoring I have seen few bare witness to something serene and unflawed, with reverence I share with you this October realm embraced in serenity humbled with infinity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 3:52:00 AM
Cole - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:11:00 PM
Cole - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/30/2008 7:56:00 AM
Cole congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 8:44:00 AM
This is amazing...wonderfully written, Cole. Good luck and congratulations! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2008 6:18:00 AM
Congrats Cole on the featuring of "October Realm." Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:12:00 PM
Hello Cole Congrats on your wonderful poem making the semi-finals and good luck in the finals! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/27/2008 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cole. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2008 5:43:00 PM
The creative imagery paints a picture with words in this one. Love the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/26/2008 3:49:00 PM
Truly, the most beautiful tribute to October/autumn I have ever read. Brilliant. Congrats on a most well deserved featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/6/2008 11:51:00 AM
Cole - wonderful poetry so very well written - Autumn is a beautiful season and you have given it a magical Realm to which it is free to roam - Great poetry - god Bless Cole
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Date: 8/6/2008 6:41:00 AM
I must agree with Kristin. Autumn is my favorite season too, and you have done a brilliant, magical justice to it in this amazing write. Will enjoy reading this many times. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/6/2008 4:59:00 AM
P.S-this is going in my favorites. :)
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Date: 8/6/2008 4:58:00 AM
Whoa! THAT was brilliantly written, Autumn is my favorite season, it truly is magical and other-worldly, I know just what you mean. Love the line, Grotesque of man, and that last line - awesome. I actually just wrote a poem of autumn, maybe I'l post it tomorrow...well done! Kristin
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