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October Morn

october morn river drifting by lone parkway benches posted on May 27, 2018

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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/28/2018 11:53:00 AM
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This is like a photograph. Such clear imagery.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 2:38:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Dale.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 7:29:00 AM
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So brief--but tells a story, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:21:00 AM
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Thank you for your visit and comment, Janice.
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 5/28/2018 6:19:00 AM
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Very creative poem. The title is great. (:
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:18:00 AM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit, JW. Haiku are not supposed to have titles so my compromise is to give temporary titles till I print 10 as a compilation. So I make sure the temporary titles are totally expendable.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/28/2018 2:47:00 AM
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A lovely image, can just picture it. You certainly made notes at the conference. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:19:00 AM
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Thanks, Tom. It was a great conference. I particularly loved rubbing shoulders with the poets.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/28/2018 2:01:00 AM
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Yes a good way of explaining a haiku, a good haiku too! Mick
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:20:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Mick, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/27/2018 11:53:00 PM
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Nicely penned haiku, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:20:00 AM
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Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.
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Paulina Wodarz
Date: 5/27/2018 11:29:00 PM
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Nice job Line! Great use of analogy! -Paulina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:21:00 AM
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Thanks for your visit and comment, Paulina.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/27/2018 10:33:00 PM
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Great haiku, my friend - with great symbolism! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:20:00 AM
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Thank you, Pandita, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/27/2018 10:04:00 PM
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Your 10 short syllables yielded long term thoughts. Thank you, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 10:07:00 PM
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Thanks, Mark. Much appreciated.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2018 6:05:00 PM
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Yes, Line! A lovely image to ponder and ponder!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 8:57:00 PM
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Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.

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