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October Evolves

Pumpkins smile in the rain of falling leaves A time of year, beauty is stalling Apples ripen for people to pick Halloween comes, a treat or a trick A time of year, beauty is stalling Love in the distance is quietly calling Halloween comes a treat or a trick Colorful dreams, candy apples to lick Love in the distance is quietly calling Apples ripen for people to pick October sights evolve from under the eaves Pumpkins smile in the rain of falling leaves Heidi Sands 10/2/19

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/2/2019 3:24:00 PM

This sure works for me. Something magical about many of your phrases -- "Love calling," "Pumpkins smiling." Very nicely done! Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2019 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Gershon! I appreciate your positive feedback :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/2/2019 11:35:00 AM

this is beautiful Heidi...love your use of imagery in this one...great rhythm and wonderfully penned :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2019 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra. I appreciate your comment on this. I hope you have a great day :)

Hello There

Date: 10/2/2019 11:18:00 AM

Oh my gosh, this is a beautiful pantoum! I enjoyed the imagery and the flow ~ another fav, my dear <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2019 11:36:00 AM

That is so nice to hear! I appreciate your kindness HT and considering it a Fav. Thank you very much :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/2/2019 10:08:00 AM

Heidi, You captured the essence of October so well. I love this poem, and the apple season. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2019 10:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Richard! I am happy to hear that :) Have a nice day!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2019 9:03:00 AM

WOW! So well written, Heidi--superb imagery..beautiful sights and sounds of October.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2019 9:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay! I appreciate your comment. It made my day today :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/2/2019 7:36:00 AM

This is exactly what I see up in these mountains except for the pumpkins lol, perfect!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2019 7:39:00 AM

Nice to hear you are in the mountains too. It is so beautiful. Thank you very much Bobby :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/2/2019 7:31:00 AM

Hi Heidi, You described the season so well in this well written Pantoum. Nice imagery and content. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2019 7:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis! I hope that you enjoy the day too! :)