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October comes; it seems like trees devour the last of sun's bright rays to dance more golden in the breeze. They frolic in new hues that blaze along with sunsets tangerine and orange pumpkins of our Halloween. October summons end of green Oct. 7, 2019, a 42-word poem For Caren Krutsinger's October Contest 45 Or Less Words Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/14/2020 9:43:00 AM

Congrats on your honors with this beautifully colored poem, Andrea.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/13/2020 5:55:00 PM

"trees that devour the last of sun's bright rays" - I love the imagery of this poem! Congratulations on your placement, my friend!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2019 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations!

L. J. Carber

Date: 10/22/2019 10:09:00 AM

I like the way you play the colors off each other as counterpoint--congrats on your win, Andrea

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/21/2019 8:05:00 PM

I enjoyed your color filled poem, Andrea! Very pretty! :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/21/2019 8:05:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Andrea :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/21/2019 3:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/21/2019 12:13:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Andrea. This is beautiful! Janice

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 10/21/2019 11:38:00 AM

Such good poetry Andrea. Congrats on your win.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/21/2019 9:28:00 AM

Andrea beautiful win!;)

Jim Joyce

Date: 10/15/2019 1:11:00 AM

ahhh..love the visions of october..lovely one :)

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 10/11/2019 5:31:00 PM

Beautiful imagery!

Robert Warlov

Date: 10/11/2019 5:27:00 PM

You mean October green is punished so fall colors can riot 'till the arrestful snow?

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/11/2019 4:09:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery Andrea! Hope I can write one for this contest. xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2019 6:11:00 AM

Wonderful observations, my friend!

Hello There

Date: 10/11/2019 1:10:00 AM

Nice! I suppose October does summon it ~ I love the imagery here! Lovely piece ~ good luck, Andrea!

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/10/2019 8:54:00 AM

For here on...it's the orange vitamins we'll need...pumpkin October time

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/8/2019 11:43:00 PM

Through the years, i find trees something i've know for ever, being born and bred country. And here having moved to Western Australia, across the street stand an amazing giant Tuart tree. Anyhow, Andrea, your poetry as always inspired me, and this little gem, is no exception..Love it.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/8/2019 7:18:00 PM

It sure does but replaces them with a kaleidoscope of color. Great job here. God Bless, JB

The Situation

Date: 10/8/2019 6:05:00 PM

I take pilots and stewertesses from airport to the hotel. And often they comment on how green it is here. It's coming but no tree has changed yet. Still green today.