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October comes; it seems like trees
devour the last of sun's bright rays
to dance more golden in the breeze.
They frolic in new hues that blaze
along with sunsets tangerine
and orange pumpkins of our Halloween.
October summons end of green


Oct. 7, 2019, a 42-word poem
For Caren Krutsinger's October Contest 45 Or Less Words Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/24/2019 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 10/22/2019 10:09:00 AM
I like the way you play the colors off each other as counterpoint--congrats on your win, Andrea
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Date: 10/21/2019 8:05:00 PM
I enjoyed your color filled poem, Andrea! Very pretty! :)
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Date: 10/21/2019 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Andrea :)
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Date: 10/21/2019 3:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 10/21/2019 12:13:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Andrea. This is beautiful! Janice
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Date: 10/21/2019 11:38:00 AM
Such good poetry Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/21/2019 9:28:00 AM
Andrea beautiful win!;)
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Date: 10/15/2019 1:11:00 AM
ahhh..love the visions of october..lovely one :)
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Date: 10/11/2019 5:31:00 PM
Beautiful imagery!
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Date: 10/11/2019 5:27:00 PM
You mean October green is punished so fall colors can riot 'till the arrestful snow?
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Date: 10/11/2019 4:09:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery Andrea! Hope I can write one for this contest. xxoo
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Date: 10/11/2019 6:11:00 AM
Wonderful observations, my friend!
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Date: 10/11/2019 1:10:00 AM
Nice! I suppose October does summon it ~ I love the imagery here! Lovely piece ~ good luck, Andrea!
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Date: 10/10/2019 8:54:00 AM
For here on...it's the orange vitamins we'll need...pumpkin October time
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Date: 10/10/2019 8:54:00 AM
Great job Grandma! Good look with the contest! See you Friday! :)
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Date: 10/8/2019 11:43:00 PM
Through the years, i find trees something i've know for ever, being born and bred country. And here having moved to Western Australia, across the street stand an amazing giant Tuart tree. Anyhow, Andrea, your poetry as always inspired me, and this little gem, is no exception..Love it.
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Date: 10/8/2019 7:18:00 PM
It sure does but replaces them with a kaleidoscope of color. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/8/2019 6:05:00 PM
I take pilots and stewertesses from airport to the hotel. And often they comment on how green it is here. It's coming but no tree has changed yet. Still green today.
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Date: 10/8/2019 5:19:00 AM
Lovely write, Andrea... Certainly a winning entry.
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Date: 10/7/2019 8:24:00 PM
beautifully penned....we still have lots of green but the colors are changing...Hugs
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Date: 10/7/2019 8:19:00 PM
Beautiful entry for October. I love the last line, so true. Hugs and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/7/2019 6:25:00 PM
Lovely hues of October, Andrea.
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Date: 10/7/2019 5:45:00 PM
Yes October comes - my birthday is on the 14th. Nice take on autumn here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/7/2019 5:20:00 PM
I'm with gershon I especially relate to that last line, at home the trees are losing their lovely leaves and the ones on the trees are dry and brown or gold:-) hugs Jan xx
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