October

leaves curl at their edges
         draped palms of orange, red or gold
         to drift downward, feather light
         to the cacophony of streets below
         in a flow of seasonal change
leaves meditative 
         a fiery corrosion 
         their peaceful indifference
         to the beating feet that dance them

October giddy
         children with puppy dog enthusiasm 
         choose costumes
fresh faces float on playful imagination
          like bemused grins on pumpkins
innocence wraps itself in trick or treat fantasy
         for youngin's ignoring autumn's chilling air
                                                scavenging thief of summer

October's tangible world
                  its energy of clamorous color
                  its frost-silver bars that cushion mornings
                  in the slow undertow
                                      to November



Poem composed September 28, 2021
Contest: October 
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kingston Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love the fall. I lived in Vermont for 13 years and your third stanza reminds me of my time there when my children were young. It paints such beautiful pictures. I am glad to have found this one.
Sambourne Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Thank you Marikate. You are right about the leaf glow of autumn. I wish that it lasted longer. Good health + happiness to you always. Brian
Calasibetta Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Love the last stanza: "October's tangible world, its energy of clamorous color....etc. fabulous ending to a well penned poem. Blessings, Paulette
Sambourne Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Much appreciation for your thoughtfulness in posting such a supportive message, Paulette. Be well. Brian
Spilchuk Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Also, congrats on your win. Descriptive, memorable Autumn scenes that touch the heart.
Sambourne Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, Dennis. The "October" poem fared better than my "September" offering. Gina gave it flight. Much appreciate your drop by. Sincerest regards, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Congrats on your win with this great work. It is very descriptive and expressive about this time of year. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Hello Sara. Your welcomed congratulatory note is appreciated. I did veer away from bright leaves with an intent to suggest October's joy in children. Be well + recovery fully. Brian
Mcintosh Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Congrats on this amazing write. God bless you friend, Love, Gina
Sambourne Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Greetings Gina + thank you for the acknowledgement + placement of my poem in your contest. Best wishes always, Brian
Alex Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 6:43 AM
What a beautiful narration! Ended with linking October with November. Great! Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. Your supportive remarks are valued + encouraging. Sincerely, Brian
Agustin Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, letting me virtually experience October as you revealed it --- since I live in an "autumnless" country. God bless you.
Sambourne Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 6:04 AM
You are most thoughtful, Beata, to stop by + post a supportive comment. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 7:31 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!
Sambourne Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Karen, for your stop by + affirmative note. Best wishes, Brian
Horsman Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 6:57 PM
You bring back many memories of scurrying feet through the fallen leaves, on my way to school and even later to be honest. Love the line 'frost silver bars that cushion mornings.' should do well in contest the vividness is excellent.
Sambourne Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 7:43 PM
Greetings Harry, Most appreciative of your comments on my small tribute to October, a grand month that is all too fleeting, like indifferent affection. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Radice Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 2:02 AM
I think this is a fantastic poem Brian brimming with atmosphere and flow; flow as in how the poem's words 'move' / cadence and how the body / theme of the poem 'moves on' to November. I may not have articulated exactly what I meant there but hopefully you get the picture. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Hello Gary, Your detailed, insightful comments are most appreciated. Thanks very much for your supportive message. Best wishes, Brian
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