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October has swept in, bedazzling the trees with a special magic as again her spell she weaves. In and out she waltzes as she touches all their leaves. Crimson, gold and orange dance with her on the breeze. Also on the breeze there glide flocks of southbound geese as the sky becomes at eventide a fantasy - blue now turning tangerine – beautiful to see! I pause to savor it and feel my soul at peace. Oct. 3, 2020 for Julia Ward's A Flock Of Birds Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/15/2020 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful words, wonderful poem, a well deserved win Andrea, congratulations.~ Belle
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Date: 10/15/2020 4:37:00 AM
Andrea, what a gorgeous poem! Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 10/15/2020 3:42:00 AM
So vivid; so musical!! Congratulations on your Top Win, Andrea!!
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Date: 10/14/2020 11:57:00 PM
Brilliant poetry, Andrea:) congratulations on your awesome win:)
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Date: 10/14/2020 10:55:00 PM
Very splendid! You take me to a moment of sublime reverie....A FAVE...Congratulations on your top Win!
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Date: 10/14/2020 10:15:00 PM
Congrats on your #1 win for this magical write, my friend!
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Date: 10/9/2020 9:01:00 AM
Brilliant... You have such a magical pen... Lend me some of your ink, i need it badly :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 6:17:00 AM
Very nice Andrea. I love your depiction of sunset - blue to tangerine. Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/8/2020 5:08:00 AM
Hi Andrea, This is a creative and delightful write about the month of October. I would like to thank you for entering my October contest and wish you a congrats for your winning entry. This is exquisite. I so enjoyed it. God bless you
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Date: 10/6/2020 5:28:00 PM
I hope you have many moments this month of feeling your soul at peace. A lovely write, as all your season writes are.
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Date: 10/6/2020 11:02:00 AM
what lovely autumnal imagery Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/5/2020 5:35:00 PM
Nothing like those V-formations of geeses, is there? Breathtaking sight. G.L. in the contest, Andrea! :) gw
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Date: 10/5/2020 4:16:00 PM
Smooth and such a lovely scene you paint.
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Date: 10/5/2020 10:02:00 AM
AH, Andrea......you're making October blush. vivid visuals and distant honking. Great job on the theme
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Date: 10/5/2020 4:47:00 AM
Such a touching piece Andrea. I see the colors, and feel through my senses what you so eloquently describe.
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Date: 10/5/2020 12:49:00 AM
Autumn always draws the best of us. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 10/4/2020 8:05:00 PM
How badly I need to feel this kind of feeling again. Thank you for this, Andrea!
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Date: 10/4/2020 6:23:00 PM
This is an excellent poem for Autumn, Andrea. Good luck on the contest! Love, Angie
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Date: 10/4/2020 3:09:00 PM
Nice, vivid descriptions of the autumn season. Best wishes for the contest.
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