Andrea Dietrich Poet Enclosed Rhyme

October

October has swept in, bedazzling the trees
with a special magic as again her spell she weaves.
In and out she waltzes as she touches all their leaves.
Crimson, gold and orange dance with her on the breeze.

Also on the breeze there glide flocks of southbound geese
as the sky becomes at eventide a fantasy -
blue now turning tangerine – beautiful to see!
I pause to savor it and feel my soul at peace.


Oct. 3, 2020
for Julia Ward's A Flock Of Birds Poetry Contest

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Beryl Edmonds October 15, 2020 at 12:53 PM Beautiful words, wonderful poem, a well deserved win Andrea, congratulations.~ Belle

Newton Ranaweera October 15, 2020 at 3:42 AM So vivid; so musical!! Congratulations on your Top Win, Andrea!!

Joanna Daniel October 14, 2020 at 11:57 PM Brilliant poetry, Andrea:) congratulations on your awesome win:)

JC Brul October 14, 2020 at 10:55 PM Very splendid! You take me to a moment of sublime reverie....A FAVE...Congratulations on your top Win!

John Watt October 14, 2020 at 10:15 PM Congrats on your #1 win for this magical write, my friend!

Paghunda Zahid October 9, 2020 at 9:01 AM Brilliant... You have such a magical pen... Lend me some of your ink, i need it badly :)

Linda Alice Fowler October 8, 2020 at 6:17 AM Very nice Andrea. I love your depiction of sunset - blue to tangerine. Congratulations! Linda

Regina Mcintosh October 8, 2020 at 5:08 AM Hi Andrea, This is a creative and delightful write about the month of October. I would like to thank you for entering my October contest and wish you a congrats for your winning entry. This is exquisite. I so enjoyed it. God bless you

John Watt October 6, 2020 at 5:28 PM I hope you have many moments this month of feeling your soul at peace. A lovely write, as all your season writes are.

Jan Allison October 6, 2020 at 11:02 AM what lovely autumnal imagery Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf October 5, 2020 at 5:35 PM Nothing like those V-formations of geeses, is there? Breathtaking sight. G.L. in the contest, Andrea! :) gw

Kathy Anderson October 5, 2020 at 4:16 PM Smooth and such a lovely scene you paint.

John Lawless October 5, 2020 at 10:02 AM AH, Andrea......you're making October blush. vivid visuals and distant honking. Great job on the theme

Michael Tor October 5, 2020 at 4:47 AM Such a touching piece Andrea. I see the colors, and feel through my senses what you so eloquently describe.

Victor Buhagiar October 5, 2020 at 12:49 AM Autumn always draws the best of us. Best for a win. ~~

Poet Tacito October 4, 2020 at 8:05 PM How badly I need to feel this kind of feeling again. Thank you for this, Andrea!

Angela Crabtree October 4, 2020 at 6:23 PM This is an excellent poem for Autumn, Andrea. Good luck on the contest! Love, Angie

W.A. Cholt October 4, 2020 at 3:09 PM Nice, vivid descriptions of the autumn season. Best wishes for the contest.