Ocotillo

A sunbaked pile of dead sticks in the ground
I’m a divine oversight, it would seem
Hundreds of long spines poke out all around
Yet inside resides a colorful dream

I’m a divine oversight, it would seem
Look past my thorns, though they do seem countless
Yet inside resides a colorful dream
Deep down, I’m hiding a beauty boundless

Look past my thorns, though they do seem countless
Moisture kisses my roots in the springtime
Deep down, I’m hiding a beauty boundless
To this kindness, sprout tiny leaves sublime

Moisture kisses my roots in the springtime
Chlorophyll captures hard radiation
To this kindness, sprout tiny leaves sublime
Transmutes into my dream’s pigmentation

Chlorophyll captures hard radiation
My plumage explodes forth with colors bright 
Transmutes into my dream’s pigmentation
In proud defiance of sun's bleaching light

My plumage explodes forth with colors bright 
I sprout a thousand flames rose tangerine 
In proud defiance of sun's bleaching light
Brush bold orange on the baked desert scene

I sprout a thousand flames rose tangerine 
Hundreds of long spines poke out all around
Brush bold orange on the baked desert scene
A sunbaked pile of dead sticks in the ground

3/27/16
For contest: A Pantoum, A Poet's Choice
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 5/25/2016 6:52:00 AM
Love the imagery
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/25/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thank you, Abdiel!
Date: 4/7/2016 8:44:00 PM
P.S. I'm notoriously bad for getting back with people (sorry 'bout that) ... in regards to the move. I'm leaving to get closer to some family that lives in Georgia: my brother, his wife, my two nieces etc., I have written about the topic a little bit, but not a whole lot ... I'm sure I'll have some different stuff to say when I actually get there! Thanks for being interested.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/7/2016 11:13:00 PM
Certainly. Raises interesting questions!
Date: 4/7/2016 8:41:00 PM
Your visions and language is always fascinating to read ... and I learned a random new flower (that I may never see), but hey, it sure does look interesting! "I'm a divine oversight, it would seem" that was my favorite line of this pantoum. Wonderful win!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/7/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy!
Date: 4/7/2016 3:29:00 PM
Hi Tom, a beautiful Pantoum, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/7/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 4/6/2016 9:59:00 PM
Tom, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/6/2016 10:08:00 PM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 4/5/2016 5:23:00 PM
Such a lovely, well-written tribute to this beautiful desert flower, Tom. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 5:48:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Date: 4/5/2016 10:33:00 AM
So rich in poetry. Would like to read over and over again...Congratulations for the win...
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Probir!
Date: 4/4/2016 8:54:00 PM
Beautiful win Tom, congratulations ...
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 4/4/2016 4:54:00 PM
WOW such stunning imagery and the images are superb congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 3/29/2016 8:05:00 AM
Even the baron lands display their beauty...loved your verse Tom...^WW^
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/29/2016 10:35:00 AM
Thanks, WW!
Date: 3/28/2016 8:59:00 AM
I love the desert and the desert foliage. I especially like the Joshua Tree and the saguaro cactus. Great poem Tom. I like it! Peace my friend:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/28/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Daniel!
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