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Oceanside Stroll

As soft summer's tide crests, so too our love Heartbeats wafting, on willowy waves race Swirling ocean's fingers reaching for shore Arms gently encircle wondrous weaving waists

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/16/2019 4:20:00 PM

Love 'willowy waves' and 'swirling ocean's fingers' - such a romance!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/16/2019 10:18:00 AM

Really lovely~ expresses you! I think you should write more like these.)) Panagiota

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 10:24:00 AM

Thank you SO MUCH, Panagiota. These are very hard for me to write; they don't come naturally. I shall keep trying my best. Appreciated! Warm wishes, Gershon

Constance La France

Date: 6/14/2019 2:06:00 PM

Gershon, such a pretty poem, well done ~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2019 2:49:00 PM

Constance, you have made my day with your encouragement. Pretty poems do not come naturally to me at all. ~ Tryin' hard in Chicago