Gershon Wolf Poet Quatrain

Oceanside Stroll

As soft summer's tide crests, so too our love
  Heartbeats wafting, on willowy waves race

Swirling ocean's fingers reaching for shore
  Arms gently encircle wondrous weaving waists

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Michelle Faulkner June 16, 2019 at 4:20 PM Love 'willowy waves' and 'swirling ocean's fingers' - such a romance!

Panagiota Romios June 16, 2019 at 10:18 AM Really lovely~ expresses you! I think you should write more like these.)) Panagiota Gershon Wolf June 16, 2019 at 10:24 AM Thank you SO MUCH, Panagiota. These are very hard for me to write; they don't come naturally. I shall keep trying my best. Appreciated! Warm wishes, Gershon

Constance La France June 14, 2019 at 2:06 PM Gershon, such a pretty poem, well done ~ Gershon Wolf June 14, 2019 at 2:49 PM Constance, you have made my day with your encouragement. Pretty poems do not come naturally to me at all. ~ Tryin' hard in Chicago